I thought it was a story but this...I do not get it at all

Is this...the SAT format for writing?!

Love how you aren't actually aiming for that Vie Ghoul dude, but just are basically insulting Ren and Shou the entire time. My guess is that you're going for the actual beagle dog.

Rather amusing.

So Kyoko should end up with a dog? This is awefully funny! But this is not a story , you know! Well , whatever, i laughed anyway!( you didn't mean Reino , right? cause he is not very ...er...doggy . He is still my favourite character tough, after Kyoko!)
lazyass out.

This isn't a fanfiction.. More like a strange author's note.

Excuse me, but shouldn't you have posted your comments elsewhere? This is obviously no story so maybe you should move them to a Skip Beat forum...

Oh my God... I second that. A beagle is better, not to speak more faithful and less complicated being. :-)

While I commend your viewpoints on Beagles in terms of dogs, Reino is nothing like a beagle, he followed her around knowing full well that she wanted nothing to do with him. He threatened to ruin her rising career in acting by raping her and wasn't afraid to do so in front of her childhood friend. In fact he seemed to like the idea because he wanted to see Sho loose everything. Besides why would you want her to get together with a stalker who is deadset on bringing her even further into darkness? Good post I think you should go into more description as to why you don't think Ren or Sho would be a good match for her.

You're trying to get us to root for Reino?! Don't you think we have thought about how mentally unstable all of her suitors appear to be? Ren is convinced he is a murderer and has a penchant for psychotic breaks, while Shotaro is a narcissistic egoist with an arrogance to rival Mel Gibson. If the poor girl is left with the Beagle, what has the world come to?! Unless you mean the actual canine. In that case you make a plausible argument. Great job _