Extremely well written and a great idea! I remember wondering about rakh spirituality myself...

Wonderful story about rakh religion and society not to mention spirituality!

ohhh, how beautiful, and I liked the last line most!

Hiya :) I'm canon blind over here, but I thought this was an extremely well written piece and dealt with some great issues, like the difference between knowledge and wisdom.

Your writing style is dense and rich. I felt that it was a little choppy in places due to a lot of commas, but that's stylistic and definitely not an actual flaw.

I also loved that aside about the strength and general awesomeness of the rakhene women - it was inspiring without coming across as preachy. And that last line about scattering into starlight is just brilliant, beautiful. I'm so glad I found this. Thank you for writing x