Me still waiting for part 2

I LOVED this chapter. My heart hurtssssssss

I just posted a few minutes ago in CH16, but read through others’ comments to see if I was just the crazy one being totally devastated that this story was unfinished. Now that I know I’m not...OMG PLEASE FINISH THIS!
Can we start a GoFundMe for Choices? A ? Lol ATLA is on Netflix now (and #1 streamed) so like... these are not totally far fetched. 3 Holmes you’re killing me.

This is incredible. I am heartbroken that the story doesn’t continue. PLEASE PLEASE PLEEEEEEEASE gift us with the part 2 of chapter 16 and the rest of the story. Truly, I have not been this excited to read fiction in like...a decade. I lost sleep reading this and then was anxiously awaiting finishing it tonight when I got home. Only to see that the story stops here! Ughhh it’s like a knife to my heart! When do you plan on getting part two of 16 and the rest posted (or at least sent for preview)?

I will write the most in depth review ever if I can get a preview of your next chapters. Seriously, you are SO GOOD! huge fan!

Is Suki interested in Ty Lee? Was that an Easter egg?

Also, Sokka’s pervasive ignorance to his effect on Toph is making me start to hate him. To some degree he knows that he is crossing the line with her. Even if ‘That Night’ didn’t happen, being so intimate with Toph emotionally and even physically is inappropriate, selfish, and cruel. He is cheating on Suki. He is asking so much of Toph without any real thought as to how this might negatively affect her ability to experience that sort of intimacy from someone else, like Ohev. Sokka is taking all those reserves from her, how could she have any emotional energy left to expend on someone else? In this chapter especially, I finally came to the conclusion that Toph was better without him, and his manipulative tendencies (whether conscious or not) are doing nothing but damaging her. BOY BYE!

this...is...SO GOOD. I haven’t lost sleep reading a book in so long. I don’t want it to end! Are there others? Do you have the prose for part 4 and 5 of That Night?

Have you done or would you PLEASE do one for Zutara?

Lol the first two paragraphs make no sense and should be edited to account for the fact that TOPH IS BLIND lolll. Otherwise, beautiful description!

Awwww this stupid sokka! Cant believeit took me years YEARS to finally watch avatar andread fanfics of my fave couple Tokka and ugghhh this just hurts too much i need more of this

I feel like they're so close

Please finish chapter 17!

I gotta admit i've barely seen any ATLA but I stumbled upon Tokka through tumblr and now I'm obsessed? Your story is so freaking cute and Toph and Sokka's interactions are killing me.

It’s been 3 years and I’m still waiting for that update :’)))

Hi r u continuing this story? Ch 17 and forward?

Seeing that you haven’t updated this in three years breaks my heart.

Upload chapter 17

I’m so mad I didn’t know about this story until now Dx I’m LOVING the plot and I don’t mind it for being slow-burn. I actually like how it’s going and can’t wait for an update(?) I’m hoping there’s gonna be one anyway :D But anyway, love the story, can’t wait for an update, and also I love the writing. English is my second language and there’s a lot of words that I had to look up because I didn’t know it’s meaning. Either way, I like it cuz now I know more words! It’s different for me and really, thanks for writing this. Really, thank you (Imma end it here )

Why you not finish this story! I want to know if Sokka remembers the night with Toph as being real! I want to know if he and Suki actually get married, or if he realizes he's being and idiot and goes to Toph! I understand you may just not plan on finishing the story, but if thats the case at least tell me how you were going to end it!