Holy molly dude i loved this chapter i really thaught it was awsome this is what i wanted from a power rangers chapter it was am amazing i loved every moment in it. what i liked most was that you addressed chracter flaws which is a great think when it comes to chracter development. Faliure is not a bad thing anyone who thinks it is a true failure. faliure is the ultimate teacher in life the unwanted family member you may say that you need in your family. Take Ash from Pokemon this kid is one of my faveoutre characters of all time becasue he redefined faulire. In the end of the indigo league he lost to Ritchie becasue he did not take the time to train Charazard properly and as a result it cost him the match. Jotho becasue he went agasint a pokemon he wasn't prepared for, Hoen becasue he met his equal in battle, Sinnoh simmilar to Jotho went agsint pokemon he did not expect to face, unova his opoent played a better game and Kalos becasue someone cheated. Howeever Ailoa came and after so many torunament defeacts he finally won one afater 20 years he finally got his dream at earning the title of pokemon champion. Each defeact was a lesson Ash took in and learned from so he could finally reach his dream. I see it this way for theese five chracters they had their own insuceruties when facing their tests Jake blaming himself for the bad stuff that happened in the team like ANakin being kidnapped by Daimian and not being able to save Gabrial, Rick not worried he would not be able to live to his farther's idea of real justice, barris not giving to the darkside and becoming a terrorist, Lux not being able to fufil his mother's wish and lead his planet to a new golden age, Rachel worried she is not right for the job. this is normal for people espaclly children as even at a young age in real life everyday can easily feel like the end of the world for so many reasons. They can range from different factors such as worrying if you dont get the girlfreind you want or possibly facing a tenage pregancy. what i liked about it is that it showed their humanily and relatiabilty to a degree. you need that in a chracter its improtant as it will make the reader undertsand them more and relate to them more and route for them more. You see another factor i liked about your chracters was they were honest about their flaws. FOr me i reader i admit their are times i do sometimes find your chracters a little too perfect or rather not willing to admit they may have made a mistake for example Zane's flaw is he dodns't tell the people he was the one who found Damian and through his actions internial or not was the catalyst which helped Daimian become the new biggest threat in the galaxy along with not letting the Ceebrus Ranger or any of the eveil rangers be known, Nathen's flaw is that he can belive in his green ranger powers too much that can make out as egostical sometimes like he thought the green ranger powers was stronger than Ceberus Ranger or Quantum Ranger powers and he paid for it by being betaen by both only winning thought extra aid. but not his own power. Alexis flaw is that she has a nepetism problem for example giving the sentor job to Rachel despite not going through the voiting system of Almora, being slight naive and not examning a situation which can make her act rashly such as why the jedi dont want to form atatchments, thinking its better to have more children despite the fact she has lived a life style where she never had to worry about monny and being more forgivng to Tiberous than Anakin despite Tiberous crimes being far worse than Anakin's crimes as her brother was sound of mind and had a choice. King Ronin's flaws is that he is a king and as a king the man lived a life style develped a degree of eletism such as downcasting the republic and seprtists despite downplaying his own flaws when it comes to demorcy you know being a king and such gaining a blind eye of certain aspects such as poltications and his son. Pltications anr't a threat to the people, Bad people are a threat to the people muderers, rapists and theifs people who are normal as you and I yet find it in themsevles to still make people's lifes missrable and they can be anyone poltictions, your best freind your neighbour you knew since you were two. Anyone can be good and anyone can be evil you dont need to be a poltitcian and by turning this blind eye he let his son become an abolsute monster on almore. Its easy to deadpan a group of people and unfortunalty its easy to not look at your own problems at home. Tiberous beat up and almost killed an inocent boy for being force senstive showing his son was discrimtive and a child absuer yet he seems more forging becasue of the family card. However likewise i am more forgiving of him as he did relaise in earlier chapters before this whole big arc he admit he should have kept a bigger eye on Tiberous so for that i am grateful he was honest to some of his flaws. Leadership, worklife, freindhsip, family life whatever it isn't about being perfect. In fact what makes faliure is perfect, is that it shows the importance you don't expect perfection from yourself or your team. Often in order to achieve true perfection you must be honest by example, owning up to your mistakes and embracing your flaws as they are an important part of who you are. Thats what makes us human and it what will make Jake, Barris, Rick, Rachel and Lux better rangers not the new powers, not the new suits now the zords not even getting the blessing from the orginal rangers it was facing their inner fears and telling them to Fuck off and allwoing themselvesl to live as who they are not what they should be. You can never lie up to someone Simba can never live up to Mufasa, Robin can never live up to Batman, we as human beings can never live up to the devine being who made us in our own image we can only live as ourselves and theese kids learned this lesson for doing so made the whole creremony really more rewarding. Dude you made an amazing job with the knighting ceremony holy crap when reading i felt so happy i was happy theese kids faced their demons they found their absolution and the way you gave a description of the collums and how they were visted by each of the past ghosts along with a propur knighting ceremony dude it was beutiful it truly felt desereved and it was flat out magical this is stuff i wanted to read and i loved every single moment of it. The kids have casted it out the shadows of Mighty Morphin Rangers and now have embraced their lives as the Power Ranger Star Knights officaly simmiler to Kimberly's veteran team became the Solar Rangers. this was an awsome chapter it reaminded me why i love power rangers, power rangers is that it shows deversity in this current team we have Jedi, Moncarhs, senstors and vetrans and its cool it shows they can learn from eachother but what i liked most about the scene was that i felt a real sense of diversity. Power rangers keeps chaniging its what has kept the show on for so long that it changes its pattern for example in Ninja storm it consited of Two Red Rangers and Two Blue rangers on the main team, Jungle fury we were introudced the first purple ranger, in the comics we were introuduced to the first female Black rangers and Male Pink ranger. So many examples wheather it be gender that usally goes with the colour or the colour scheme that the team has or how many rangers are on the team Power Rangers knows how to reawaken the imagination and creativty of this franshise. You Have succed here you gave yourself your own idienty and you have done an amazing job no ego, no popularity battle this was a propuer story about power rangers and this was a chapter that reminded me why i am glad to be involed in this story and allowed you to use Ceberus Ranger, Ceberus Zord and Tiberous. The scene with Padme and Nathan-Ventress was nicly excuted however i did find it hard to see Ventresss using the victum card in her fight agasint Anakin with respect she was sent there to kill the guy i mean she had it coming that defect it was karma. But never the less it was nicly written as it was honest just people who were talking about old times and learning about accpetinace and happiness like a nice reuion of a couple of freinds i like it and i felt in a strange way completed like i found true solace when reading this chapter dude. Dude thank you for writeing this chapter it was done nicly and beutifully and i am glad it exsists.

HOLY SHIT!
THIS WAS FREAKING AWESOME!

The Star Knight Rangers are here!

Happy August!

First off they said the name! Second wondering when the Gold Ranger will arrive. Great chapter keep it up dude.

THIS WAS AWESOME
KEEP IT COMING DUDE

Dude i love this chapter so much the nostogia feels go thorugh me when i read it. I appritacte your kindness in the recent discliamers. i am greatefeul given the recent tension between us as of late. The Ceberus Ranger will come when he comes i just hope i get a chance to write the desxriptions on his battlizer and the secret wepons you plan for him. He's just my baby i love him the same way JDF loves the Green Ranger. Its just when i see him in this fic and the pictures i commsioned of him i always get surpised as someone like me never in million years imagine i could make someone like that. Thats why he is so special to me becasue he's evidence i can do great thing. okay for arguments sake i will get out the stuff i didn't like in this chapter. I kinda get tired of Barris and her issues with the jedi i mean if she feels so uncorfortable with them why dosn't she just leave them? You see when my mum got cancer, when i tried to kill myself i lot my fate. As a kid i would go to sunday mass in liverpool my job was to light up the candels. I tried to be a good chatolic and all that but in 2017 i got hit badly that i found it hard to belive in god or to even like god. If God was so good then why did he create people like me? That was the question i kept asking myself. In that regard i do sympthize with Barris this loss of a faith in her relgion but what i dont like is that you have protrayed the rangers to be too much like the jedi. I mentioned this to you in an email i sent to you last week that i felt you were making the rangers and ALmora too much like Jedi and republic. Now a days when it comes to theese subjetcs your writeing feels less creative and more like properganda. Having the rangers who are children and join a war and even having one of them speack out during a govermental metting in the white ranger arc. its just well to quote rick sanchez 'You wanted to be safe from the government so you became a stupid government. That makes every Rick here less Rick than me.' it somtimes feel like this when i read into her chracter arc. I wish i didn't but seeing all theese similarties. you just have to ask was she an acholic who had a drinking problem and traded beer for cyder? Your still drinking alchol it dosn't change who you are or relive the pain your going through. you just are drinking the same posion with a different brand name. Zane talked about the jedi desereving the hatred of the people what happens when same said people see the simmilarites and call him out on his hypocrasy? What will he do then? Will he just allow another Daimian and Tiberous to come to exstaiance? What happens when he becomes also dersving of the people's hetared as he has made the same mistakes. One thing the Jedi have over the rngers is that they are honest in what they do. Did zane ever tell the people he recruited children to be rangers? After all he make keepers of the peace into wepons young children just like the jedi did. Thats all i will say on the matter just that i am revlied she hasn't compelty given up on the order. Now for the stuff i do like which was prettu much everything else in this chapter. Starters i do like the conecept of Ronin writeing a book for the family history. the statement reminded me of this historical drama i wtached called I calduias, in it the ceaser cladius writes about his family and what he expereinced in his lifetime including the 3 ceasers who preceded him. Its a cool conecept and makes him cooler as a chracter than just as a means to an end chrater. I hope he gets his family fishing trip the guy seems a bit depressed recently even in this chapter when he rembered lossing Angelo. Loosing a child is one of the worst things which could happen to you and Ronin his expresion over the loss was quite real. He must have thought of his son every single day of this life. The next part i liked is the rangers medevil outfits they are cool and i wonder will they be keeping them permantly like they kept the ninja suits in mighty morphin season 3? They seem to do much more and really are a cool add on espcally when they can combine with the morphers for a certain ammount of time. I also did like Gaberial's intrest in the rangers and giving them an explantion giving this nice knights of the round table theme to them. I think she could have expanded a bit more on Jake. Granted i can see the jason in him in some regards however i do not belive Jason is the only red ranger he shares simmilarties to. If anythig i think he shares stronger simmilarties to two other red rangers Wesley the red time force ranger and Casey the Red jungle fury ranger. While it is true the jason in him does show in terms of braveness and be willing to help a enemy i the other two red rangers i have mentioned show stronger in him than the jason traits. Granted i can undersatnd why Kimberly would make the symerlarity due to her only knowing two red rangers in her life. But lets look at the two i have mentioned what makes Jake like Wesley is quite simple both were born to a high type of life style beeing a grandson of a king and a potential heir to the throne gives jake more adavangates than the avarage man simmiler to wesley who lived in the mansion all his life. Like wesley both red rangers had no prior expereince in battle the first time they did any propuer fighting was as rangers. They both fell in love with a girl they shouldn't but needed to and both learned about marturity and accepting of others. What makes Jake like casey is quite simple they both are peacemakers, casey in the jungle fury series actually was a pretyy chilled guy who always looked in the best of people even his arc enemy Jarod who was the host of Daishi. Both red rangers value peace and are willing to put it first before all others. for that jake can show he has a calm mind. with a calm mind leads to maturing and humblness this can be shown when Jake thought he coulnd't live up to Jason''s legacy but here is the funny thing one could make the same argument about Jason for example acroding the Austin St John on a youtube video when he met his super sentai counterpart from the japansess tv show Kyōryū Sentai Zyuranger the actor who played the red ranger Yūta Mochizuki told him his chracter Jason was actually the 26th red ranger. So the iorony is Jason pronbbaly felt the same like Jake worried he wouldn't be able to live up to the 25 red rangers before him. Everything else with Gaia was a blast i loved it and felt like a propuer adventure game like lord of the rings. Also you finally adressed the teams name Star Knights. I remeber back in 2013 when you asked me for a name the reason i came up with star knights was well 'star' from star wars and 'knight' from jedi knight. Thats why i really came up with the name to show the crossoverness and just made sense but i liked how you did in this chapter. What made this chapter cool was that theese rangers were finding their sense of idenity. Becuase remeber depsite the name Star Knights they really were just another branch of Mighty moprhin like branch number 5.

First branch Grace, Nikoli, Jaimie, Terona and Danial
second branch Jason, Billy, Zack, Trini and Kimberly
Thrid Branch Tommy, Rocky, Billy, Adam, Aisha, Kat and Ninjor
Fourth Tiberous, Angelo, Bail, Mina, ALexis, Nathan, Qui Gon and Tahl
Fith Jake, Rick, Lux, Barris, Rachel, Nathan, Ahsoka, Anakin, Obi-wan, Zane and Kimberly

When you look at this it isn't suprising the rangers would feel to a degree insecure about not living up to the orginal. After all they are just another branch to an already big tree. Thats what made me love about the star knights title. As it shows they dont want to be just another branch on the tree that would be a mistake. they need to be themselvels not try to lvie up to people they never met but be who they are not what they could live up to. You can only be someone with an idienty and they are fidning it and i thought it was beutiful how you writen the scene. I also enjoy how you made gaia i like the forest and the creatures you have introuduced it adds a nice imagantion to the world.

I also loved the wooden wepons again it made it feel like a propuer medevil advenute nicely done my freind.

The damithor scnee was okay just some nice filler for hypeing up talazin. It was cool creepy. But i am curous to find out why Archnia wants to attack Ahsoka home planet? I could understand Endor, Corosant, ALmora or any of the sepristis planets. But why there of all places? What value does it have for any of the current villans you have shown us. you have a created a mystery of cursioty becasue more questions will arise. is it just a random target or could it be for somting way more? only time will tell. Great chapter my freind i am sorry if i was hard on any crsitism. It was a good chapter and i look foward to the next one. You did a good job my freind and i hope you are safe

Dr. Vindi is working on something again. His attest abomination is going to Kiros. Those poor Togruta colonists.

I liked the origin no complaints here. Great chapter keep it up dude.

If these guys are going to some place with medieval armor, does the mean the girls are going to be wearing medieval women's clothing or armor?

Didn't see that coming.

Medieval armor must be back in style.

okay okay. to be honest with you i dont think anyone really knows who the orginal power rangers are. wheather you read comics, films, tv show etc i doubt you will find the real answer as it lways changes dosn't help with the compnay changing like hasbro is number 3 to own it. Dude its your story and i get what you mean in the disclamier. To behonets i think everyone has done it on this site making their own orgin story of the rangers of who they are i think it always be fan speculation and really comes to what you would like to see the orginal ones be. Like as a kid i always had different ideas i didn't really care about the contiuty i just took as much info as i could get from each team and did my best with it like you have done and honestly your one isn't bad it had heart and i did like the idea Zordon was in the orginal team its a cool idea. Really its up to the fan like me, you and whaterer that will determine who the orginal rangers where the only thing you need to do is know how to make a good story and you did i got nostgic for teams like Lost galaxy and wild force when reading the backstory. you put work in and it showed i liked it. when reading the padme section i was a little mixed with Nathen's assement with the republic and his forginess of ventess. With all due respct dude and i know this will probbaly be sucidel in terms of the battliser happening but it was hard to take his stement seriosly. Like if maul, cad bane or even someone has horrible as sidous was willing to do the same change as ventress did. would they given the same chance or is she a special case. i mean almora has a monacy so long as that exsits the people will never truly be able to pick a leader in other words a president of almora the most freedom thing you could give to the people. One could argue the reason his family keeps the monchy to make sure they stay in power no matter how limeted. Addtioanly Alexis was willing to named Rachel her succsor to the sanate, granted she did offer the job to her i must ask did she look at other apllicants beforhand. I say this out of worry becasue if she didn't it shows a degree of power over the people has they didn't get the choice of the election in their next senestor. ALso she made ventress padme's bodyguard without her permsion while i know she did in the good intentions she didn't allow padme to choose. i know you will hate me more for saying this and i doubht i will get anymore emails from you but when nathen makes that kind of claim he needs to be prepapred to face some backlash of his own has what i have said was done through observations on past chapters. i know if you are reading this you are already planning to have my head on the ceberus ranger conent. i dont say it too hurt you rather to protect you. Politics is evil, its horrible and at the same time a needed evil. its just when you make bold claims of freedom to the people you need to examine your writeing and see how much of the statement is true otherwise people will turn on you as they will not belive you. Apart fromt that i did enjoy this chapter very much gaia is beutiful i loved how much descriptuion you gave everything was bueitful it was amazing and i had a really wonderful time as it felt like a nice fanasty world like narbnia or middle earth. i also loved the interactions with Kimberly manly because this was not kimbrly but rather the ranger slayer. the emtions you protayed her to have when being confronted with the idea she feels like a fraud is real. i mean its like that simpsons epsiode when they discover sprigfeild the foudner was a pirate. but what spereates her from him is the fact she does feel remsorusefl she dosn't like attention or prasie as she feels she dosn't derseve ti and is stealing it froms omeone else. that kinda of thing can really hurrt a person. but i know your planning somthing with this as a rachel i have a feeling with like this incernation more than the kimberly from her univerese. i have a feeling its sorta like doctor who there have been so many actors playing the role yet you find that one actor who is yours, your personl hero it dosn't matter what number they are or if they are the orginal you just find a certain love throug them. and considering the things this kimerbly did i think it would be a nice change if someone saw her as a hero and not as a traitor. i look foward to more chracter develpment from them. I really did enjoy the chracter expansion you have given zordon. i did find theese chrcaters intrestting billy daughter for one blimey what stories will get from her. i think what also loved was the use of names. they felt new and unique for at least two chracters names you woulnd't often hear and i like that i love that i want you to it more as it creates a cool conept of world building. names like gandalf and dumbledore where made for their worlds i like it becasue it gives the chracter a sense of uniquenss and memory. The segmtn with Ventress was fun and its nice foreshwing to anakin's redemption. It will be kinda funny thougn as when Ankin does come out of prison and if he and padme stay married then wouldn't ventrss tenchanlly be working for him. Now that would be funny. But what i aprrivate from her chracrer is that she is honets good or evil she is honest. One thing i like from any chracter is pain, pain is what makes a person relatble to the reader as it shows sympothy, Thats the power of story telling. that you can create inspiration and learning techniques for a real life person. Take avatar it has chracter after chracter of people showing sympathy. ventress is a desert rose all she needed was some water to grow. I look foward to the joeuney and am intressted in the training outfits the rangers wil be weraing. I am sorry if upsted you with any negtivty in this review it was done from observation. But you have a good thing going on hear and i am intrested to see what happens next for the five. plus your ogrion story was good and i can respct it. I hope you are well and that i can be forgiven

christ almora is boring

Wondering what she's doing there? And will we know what happened to the original rangers? Great chapter keep it up dude.

hey dude im afraid im doing well. Recenlty i was acting very bizzare this week with emails, its just for some reason i get angry and it just bites me that along with the fact i been vommiting a lot today. I thought i was having a relaspe but it turns out things maybe worse. my mum has been showing sighns of what i have now today and it worries us both that this isn't compellty mental but we may have some kind of illness hopefully its not seriousand it clear way soon but were worried that the signs are simmiler to one another. starter yay Kimberly is back i dont care how she is back i am just glad she it. i had such a huge crush on her when i saw my first mighty morphin epsidode she stoled my heart. I know her staus as orginal pink ranger could be debatle due to the new comtuinity introduced in the comics but i dont care the line was badass and had gravity. One thing i will aplloud you is how you delt with pain and worry in this chapter. I was concerned with Anakin this chapter as he was a double edged sword in this. One hand he showed he changed the other hand he was showing a certain action that made him like his evil side. for example when he felt a little happy damian was dead made me wonder was his darkside courrputing his goodside and when he said he felt some admiration to daimian was that him talking or was it his darkside promiting his old master. What i like what you did was his chracter was show he isn't an open book he someone who will make you worry of possbile replase like i have right now. I just want to him get betetr and move on with his life cause he is in real hell right now being war with himself it is a horrible feeling. another thing i liked about this chapter was zane and how he is getting ready to war and essailnty playing godfarther to degree considering teaming up with his arch enemy's wife. it causes a hughe cause of concern i was with Aplha in his worry. i did appricate the sentment he had to his old freind thought it made him apper human and i think a lot people would sympsis with him as a broken freinship is quite comon and it still srtings no matter how old you get. What i really loved about this chaoter was the world building and description a ot readers would somtimes read stories not for the chracters but just for the world. i like how you designed gaia with the rock monster and high level of force and the info you gave about damithor. it was awsome dude and it showd a lengh of your creativity. so all in all great chapter and a nice way to finsih it with a cliff hanger. be safe dude and i am sorry for how i been acting