Add lint sellzen to issei harem

hope to read more.

shit fic don't read

fuck you pussy issei

Okay. These last two chapters have been hilarious. It’s just my kind of humour. I also noticed it has been a while since you have updated your stories. While I don’t mean to say this as a push for you to continue if you don’t wish to, I would love to see and read more. The DxD stories I have read from you are amazing. Either way, take care and stay safe.

I like it, I just get confused at times as to why 'this is talking' and "this is thinking"

This chapter is forcing canon events with Asia.
1. He knew Asia was a person of the church and was quite a pure person.
2. He sensed the tainted holy energy from the church he brought her too, meaning Fallen Angels.
3. He told Raynare about the girl and she told him the fallen angels were going to kill her and extract the sacred gear.
What does the MC do with this information? Nothing for days, he completely abandoned Asia. Why? So he can force canon events. Can he really b***h about Raynares lack of common sense when he pulls s**t like this?

at least you weren't accused of being a 30 sec man

ignore all the negative messages from people, this is a classic on the site that I'm coming back to years later. that should show you made a story good enough to be remembered. keep up the good work!

youre explaining way too much instead of letting the natural flow of the story to do it, its almost like reading a textbook in the form of a story, literally boring.

'strong sense of sacrifice' bullshit! more like naivety, if you think a five year old can properly articulate thought at an analytical level you're either as fake as the character you're writing or you live in another world.

Why have you used apostrophes for speech, and speech marks for thoughts. Lmao.

but wait, if thats the case, then hes still not gonna be a match for vali, who was able to beat kokabiel rather easily with his balance breaker, while the entire peerage struggled to even survive for a short period of time. you said in the description that issei was powerful in this, having trained from a young age, and on top of that having the heart of a dragon, giving him a healing factor(still dont follow how that works, but whatever), making him stronger and faster more easily, and giving him tougher skin, yet. as he is, with your power level settups, hes barely above average high class devil in strength with the boosted gear, vali is around ultimate class from the start, and thats something that highclass cant really compare to at all, it would take more boosts than any sane person would allow to even reach his base level, and then you factor into it divine dividings ability of halfing the power of anything you touch, it would just be another cannon copy ;-;

course i could be wrong here, thats just the way im seeing it though

I just want to point out how silly it sound for you to have Issei c as all her IRINA but still not know she's a girl if you're so up her butt as a character to seem to state for writing this story you would have known Issei knew her as Ike hence why he never caught on she was a girl not really a valid excuse but Issei has proven your typical abdominal clueless character

“Time for the strange thrusting”...
HAHAHAHAHA! This had me laughing out loud and because I read on mobile the people around me asked what was so funny. I had to bull shit some improve on the spot to avoid explaining this while my mom was within earshot.