I love this story! Your Monroe and Charlie interactions were perfect and Miles being Charlie's real dad (as I've always hoped and wondered) is so awesome! Thank you for writing this! I'm going to read the next part right now.

Love this story, and "The Sum of All Truth". The nickname "tough girl" is adorable!

boom poor Charlotte but i love your story :)

sooo gooooddddd

I loved this story! It might be frustrating that there isn't 'charloe' action but I really really appreciate that you make it credible and well explored. It's very realistic and it doesn't 'force' the characters together. After all, they both have reasons not to get close to each other and the magic is in how it happens in spite of this.
You write very well and you give justic to the characters. I really wish this was the actual show! Thank you for sharing. You really made my day.

Great story!

Oh thank god, thought i was gonna go crazy. I get so irritated when people finish a story like that and never finish. Cant wait for next story

Thanks for sharing your work! I really enjoyed this episode. Anddon't worry about the cliffhanger; all episodes have cliffhangers to keep us hungry for more. :D
I really like how you're keeping the characters true to how they act in the series. It would really make no sense if Charlie went from hating to loving too fast. I think you are letting things progress nicely, and I love the dialog between them.
Now on to the next episode...

I loved this fic! I can't wait to read The Sum of All Truth!

I loved this story and can't wait to see where you will take it next.

Omg, cant wait for the next chapter :)
Realy like this one :) update soon :)

Oh my gosh :o That cliffhanger! I hope you're going to start writing the next one soon.

I love this 'episode' and cant wait for the next on x What a cliff hanger ahah x please write the next 'episode' ASAP x

Ahhhh! Girl. You kill me. I literally yelled "What the hell did she just do?" At my computer, nice cliffhanger girly :) Can't wait for the Sum of All Truth...I'll be there. And as much as I agree with your "Get it on already" comment, I begrudgingly agree with you and appreciate how you keep them true to their characters.

Amazing. I agree with the "slow burn" of the Charloe romance. I love them together, but yep, it should talk a while for them to really fall for each other. I really enjoy your writing style. Keep up the good work, I'll be waiting for The Sum of All Truth.