I love your story so far! I feel sorry for you and how much everyone's asking for more. I completely understand how sometimes you can get stuck on something you're writing, or anything, really, and it's really hard to get back on track. It's also a bit hard for you because you are creating something entirely new, you don't have a book/movie storyline to help you. But I encourage you; though, push through! Write us some more wonderfulness! We love you, and you write with a beautiful hand. I don't know if you are writing something right now, or if you've completed several chapters but haven't uploaded them yet. We are looking forward to more lovely chapters, though. Good luck.

Plz i need more!

This is a amazing fanfic looking forword to reading moor and cant wait for the next part (hint hint)

Cor
And yes it was a cute ending

Ok you've got my attention
this could be vary interesting, loving it so far

Looks good so far

I need more chapters! I need more to read! Please post more soon.

I really feel you do a great job of writing with C.S. Lewis's voice and style - perhaps better than any author I've encountered. Please keep it up, since I'm eagerly awaiting the next installment!

you are an amazing writer

Hooray for updates! Anyway it is nice to see a comparison between the two worlds Aslan/Eru characters.

My biggest complaint about this is how short the chapters are! I'm loving this fic and it's beautifully written. You really capture the characters and the story-telling aspects so well!
Looking forward to the next update. Keep up the awesome work!
TexasBean

You don't even unstand how in love I am with this story

I liked how you brought up his change in view after turning to a dragoon, how he changed his view of his parents and realized they weren't what he once thought.

I was waiting on pins and needles for her to remember the necklace! I like how Aslan's sword cut through the nazgul swords! Very cool!

Wow! Very nice, very action packed and interesting! I love it! Well written and created.