A perfect ending to an amazing story. I'm glad that despite everything and their differences, Elsa and Thomas made up for each other and ultimately got hitched. I know that Thomas would make a wonderful king!

This was a great story to read. Everyone was in character, and I really liked your attention to detail with descriptions and word choice.

Your OCs were really good. Thomas was my favorite of them, but I also liked James, George, and Lukas as well. I hope those three will eventually find their happy endings. I'm glad that even if Elsa didn't choose either of them that they still remain friends with her.

I thank you once again for writing this story. It was a very nice ride. I hope you have a great rest of your day/night and keep writing!

Best,

SawuScimitar74

She chose Thomas! Yay! With how James, George, and Lukas clapped their hands and were happy for Thomas, those three men wouldn't have been bad choices themselves. They didn't get upset or were poor sports. They were good sports, unlike Eric. I'm honestly glad she didn't choose Eric after he didn't even bother congratulating Thomas unlike the other three men.

I think if Thomas isn't chosen, it should be either Lukas, James, or George. Eric may seem like a nice guy, but he's cocky and arrogant. I think Elsa deserves someone who is modest and humble.

I'm glad that Curtis accepted defeat with dignity. Even though he wasn't chosen, he still has other interests back in Berlin. Glad to know that things will hopefully be okay for him despite what happened.

That scene at the end was hilarious!

George seems like a great guy, just like James. Glad that there are a few dates that Elsa is actually enjoying with her potential suitors. :)

I can't believe Duncan was so mean to Anna. At first I thought he would be worthy, now he isn't.

James seems to be a good match for Elsa with the way he treated her. He's a great guy, but I hope Thomas eventually wins in the end.

I feel bad that Elsa's dates aren't exactly what she's looking for. Hopefully she'll soon go out with a guy that will actually pay attention to her. Attention is key during dates.

I'm glad that Gerard and Gale were eliminated first. That is not how you treat Elsa or anyone else in the royal family. If they can't treat them correctly, then they clearly do not deserves Elsa's hand.

Hopefully there are some guys who are actually good guys. I'm optimistic for a few of them in particular; James, George, and Lukas.

I am eager to see what the suitors are like. I'm beginning to wonder if there are any them who are amazing guys like Thomas is. Hopefully Thomas will win out in the end for being Elsa's king in the future, but I guess we'll have to wait and see what happens.

Can't wait!

I'm glad that there will be no more Bernard from now on. He was a dirtbag. Nonetheless, he was a great villain.

I fell very bad for Elsa for what she did to Thomas. I know she didn't mean to do that to him. She is a woman with good intention no matter what.

Can't wait to see where this goes from here!

Glad Bernard won't be troubling the sisters any longer. He needs to never get into contact with them ever a jerk he is.

This was a great chapter! I can't wait to see if things get better from here for Arendelle (which I have no doubt they will). :)

How can I hate Elsa? She's just not the type of person to rush things. I have no doubt that she and Thomas will make up for each other someday and eventually (hopefully) fall in love.

Keep this amazing story up please. I'm thoroughly enjoying it. :)

This is a great backstory for Thomas. I like the relationship he has with his brothers. It's a shame that Peter seems to be kind of a jerk. I have no doubt that Thomas will be a wonderful king should he become one someday. :)

Don't worry about the haters. Your story is amazing! I'm getting more and more into it as I read it. Can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter! I am starting to think that Bernard will disappear from the sisters' lives forever. I really hope he does, as he is a big fat jerk.

Keep it up! :)

I'm said that Rapunzel had to leave, but she and her husband do have Corona to look after. Hopefully they will be able to visit Arendelle again someday.

Bernard is beginning to get on my nerves. The sooner he is out of Elsa and Anna's lives, the better. I think you did a great job at creating him. He is definitely a better villain than Hans ever was, at least in my opinion.

Can't wait to see where this goes from here!