This is so cute.. I looove it

Hi. You write well. Keep writing. I liked the twist in this story. Never thought of it but I liked your take on it. I hope you could make it into a book. I'd really like to see how you tell their story from this point of view. Have a wonderful day.

Atena e Afrodite, eu adorei sua história.
Como descreveu Atena e como sua relação com Afrodite melhorou.
Eu espero que continue escrevendo.

Wow. I have no words! This is great, I loved everything especially the details you included. Thank you and keep on writing!

So pure! I loved the lovely twist on the myths.
Go women! Go my lesbian peers! ;)

plz update

I like the lore-y take on it, even if the subject has been used quite often in literature, but I digress. Lesbian goddesses for the win!

Omg!
Awesome start!

This was lovely.
:)

I'm hoping you don't discontinue this story, since it seems it is quite a while since you updated this story.

Aw please update this! Your writing style is awesome!

Lovely

You are very articulate in your writing. Its plain to see. And yes, thats a compliment. I clarify so none shall be confused. With my particular word usage.

I've always been enamored with greek mythology since as long as I can remember. I'd gobbled up any book I can find, so this work is extremely pleasing to me. Nothing is out of place. Its perfect. What a joy to read.

You describe things beautifully. I love how Athenas first time was so some other Athena/Aphrodite stories they make Aphrodite out to be almost a predator. But I like that you don't protray her that way.

Well, well, soldier...

Hoo-rrah! 1st Review, Btches!

Now...(Whistles) This was...divine. *O*

So, we have the new Queen of Olympus and her brand-new, eternal waifu, and a sweet, beautiful, simply divine tryst in bed. Yeees! (Wavy Line) Wow, that was...this chapter made love to my eyes. *O* (Sighs Contentedly)

I think you've outdone yourself, brother. Thank you for this divine present! :3

Great work!
Update ASAP! That's an order!

Semper-Fi! Carry on!

Nice story! I really think there should be an update since I wanna see where it could go n.n
skydragon2394

Update! Definite update! Love this!