How to put this? If stories are truly a partial reflection of their writer then this author is a chauvinistic pig with dreams of grandeur who doesn't know what love is.

First a jonin of Kurenai's skill is somehow knocked out by five dudes. You didn't state
if they were ninja or anything and if she fought in the war then we know her skills are still sharp. I'm not ever sure how she fought in the war considering her pregnancy timeline. All that said, now she says no one ever calls her beautiful... we're talking about the same Kurenai here right? I'm looking past the grammatical and literary nightmare that is your writing, but to make such poor story choices is just sad.

La suite avec impatience.

Même si j'aurais aimé que cela soit plus psychologique.

Sasuke peut changer sakura nan.

Le départ de naruto va être la fin de konoha.

Pour moi jai toujours eu une ambiguïté sur son se e.

J'adore tout le monde oublié que naruto est le héros mais que sans lui ionoha n'est rien.

Pour konohamaru je m'y attend pas mais en y réfléchissant un peu on peu s'attendre à cela .
Par couche avec elle c'est mignon.

I never read a more childish fanfiction than I do right now maybe you guys go all the where they write Star Wars fanfiction and get a proper lesson and how to write fanfiction

I love your story so far.I've been reading it since the first chapter almost 4 hours now today and It's really really really really dang good.

Need more chapters! This is a really good fic. Thanks for the chappy

I'm really excited about the next chapter

Iruka cheat on anko really -_-
This fic is good and sucks at the same time. The choices u made for this fic are pretty crappy, disappointing and stupid but the relationship Naruto has with his wife, daughter and sisters are great. This fic a 3 out of 5 not the best but not the worst. Let see if I can keep reading.

Wow Hinata that was lame. I'm not into wedding but yeah it was a good chapter. Good idea on blood ritual.

Evil was supposed be Hinata evil. On last review. Idk why it keep happening