Hmmm, interesting start.

Let's see if she tells panpan who her other I'd is:)

Hahahaha dear god I have never seen anything shift in tone this horribly in a long, long time. I have to say you really screwed the pooch with the last chapter.

I can stomach rape, both as a plot device and as a drama vehicle, but I can't stomach its inclusion ina story that had a completely different tone leading up to it. I won't call you a bad writer, if nothing else your dialogues are good, but you're not anywhere near good one, either. I am glad this is dead.

Either re-evaluate what you're trying to write or don't write again, for the good of us all.

Hope you update this

Awesome story so far. What a chapter!

whelp this story is dead as fuck

Are you ever going to update this? It's my favorite worm Taylor/amy story ever.

If you aren't going to update it, you should at least post a summery of your plot outline. I'd like to know how it would end.

You've worked this Amy in such a way that her being with Taylor makes seems reasonable enough. Impressive.

Nothing to say, except that this is too good.

This is so good, I am completely enthralled by your use of the characters. You've nailed Taylor as a character. The hesitation before she speaks, the way she's awkward but well intentioned. Perfect. Thanks for taking the time to write this. It's very entertaining.

Wow. Love the story and hoping for more : )

I really enjoyed this fic it was a interesting, Thanks for Writing!

Interesting story!

And I'm at the end. You had to finish on such a...well, not quite a cliffhanger, I guess, but on somewhere where I _really_ want to know what happens next. Oh well. I think you handled the scene very well, and I'm genuinely disappointed to see it end (that's a compliment, to be clear.)

I really, really like this story. I'm sad that it seems to be dead, but I'm very much enjoying what I've seen so far. I hope you might resume it someday.

The Amy/Taylor interactions in particular are great, and you really captured Lisa. I liked how you wrote Carol, too, you really portrayed her coldness towards Amy well.

This was a good story and I hope you update this soon as I am looking forward to seeing what happens next.