Man, this story was certainly...APPEALING! But it honestly hit me right to the CORE. The descriptions you had, and just the general writing style kept me HUNGRY for more. I hope this review PLANTS A SEED in your mind, I hope you GROW your fanfiction stories, you deserve APPLE-lause (applause) for your work!

Well, I don't know what I just read, but it's either the work of a genius or a madwoman. Probably the latter. Happy writing if you shall continue this marvelous crack fic (and yes, there are no words for it)!

Amazing. You need to write more! And maybe go a little further ;)