It's a really well written story, since I am struggling through something similar, you've given words to my feelings, and helped me overcome it. Thank you. :)

Damn, you are such a sharp person! The way u piece the stories up make it seemed so realistic and interesting! Its kinda cool to see how you express ur story so well, without having to use bombastic vocabulary. It has been a wonderful rollercoaster ride of emotions, thank you for writing such a great fic! I am inspired to become a writer like you!

this is a work of art! i really admire your well structured writing and it got me really teary eyed every time you spin a yarn about Sakura and Touya! your work just made me more in love with those siblings :")
keep up the amazing work!

I just have to say that I absolutely loved this story. I spent the whole day reading it, and it is really amazing. I love the plot, but mostly I was fascinated by the deep insight into Toya's character that you created. Congratulations on the fantastic job!

This is DEFINITELY one of THE best CCS stories I've ever come across! I loved the way you described Touya and Sakura's brother-sister bond!

Hey, say there, I do love your fics here, I have for a really long time. And sicne I found some time to finally through some of my old favorites I am surprised to find that your fic with Tomoyo as the star has dissapeared. Did I mistake you for another writer? I thought you had written one.

i've read your story years ago and since then, i couldn't read another Touya x Kaho fic...this is such a beautiful story. I love how their relationship blossomed. And being a fan of these two, i am very grateful. This story, simply put, is THE one.

I have spend 5 hours reading this and I all i have to say is great, splendid history. I was looking for a logic explanation of what happened between Kaho and touya and this history is perfect. Really, I enjoy it, thanks to share your talent with us :D. Best regards from Colombia.

You did justice to Touya and Kaho! I'm at loss for words at the sheer awesomeness of the story, characterization, and writing skills. You've also have the honour of converting me into a Touya fan. Best CCS fanfic ever!

You've an amazing talent... I must admit you did a great job on this story.. It seems as if you knew what had exactly happened in Touya's life. I loved your style of writing.. It's so cool.. Your imagination is superb!

Amazing. You got everyone's character down to every little notch, you created a beautiful story about Toya and Kaho. I was absolutely glued to the screen. To top it off, it seems absolutely possible. Great work. Not many Toya/Kaho stories out there, and I'm sure this one blows most if not all of them out of the water.

You'll do great things with your writing skills!

i wasn't about to read this cuz it's about tory but...wow. I'll reconsider my absolute annoyance at my baby sisters now, except they're nothing like sakura (wish they were!) heh heh, excellent depiction of baby sakura and tory, sakura was completely adorable and i wish i could trade off with caitlin (4) for her (wait, i would never do that, she's still my sister!) hehe great story!

Simply beautiful. Thank you for a heartfelt story.

Tella

"Bits and pieces of Japanese?" What a joke; you don't know any, from what you've shown. Just because you use random Japanese words doesn't mean you know the language. If you want to learn it, why don't you go out and study it properly, instead of corrupting your work with (misspelled) Japanese phrases? Either write it in English or write it in Japanese, not "Wapanese." Oh, getting off the point here... Yeah. My point is, you don't know Japanese, get over yourself.

Why does it appear that Touya can sense Woody (in the Sakura trees of chapters 1 and 7) and Watery (in the aquarium in chapter 4), if at this point in the story's timeline all the cards should still be sealed in the Book of Clow? Touya's comment about despising the job of feeding penguins was an aptly inserted touch of ironic humor. i find the moments when Touya cares for Sakura despite his feelings toward her very touching and even cute. As Touya himself says, ' And no one is cuter than Sakura.' i especially like chapter 13: Touya realizing and admitting his love for Sakura is so beautiful; it almost made me cry. That just doesn't happen with stories.