I can't believe I've found this just now! I've read a bunch of HPXFma crossovers, and this is by far the best I've ever read (no kidding) - I really loved your choice of words (I learned a bunch of new vocabulary lol), and I felt like your characterization was spot-on! Great Job

Go fucking kill your self you mother fucking bastard and take this piece of shit with you

In book five, Sirius becomes Dead Serious.

Anyone else a little dissapointed in the fact that Edward is potrayed so weak and so stupud compared to canon and especially compared to HP world standard?

I can’t seem to find the link to the picture, is it still up somewhere?

Wow i love this story so much especially now that ed and the trio are getting close. and don’t even get me started on the arm drama thats been going on, it’s perfect. you’re doing any amazing job and I’m so glad winry and al and mustang visited. and feel bad for him that his arm wasnt working (poor boy) but that drama is sooo good

The story is interesting thus far, however the one thing that bugs me is Snape. He seems kinda ooc to me with him joking and laughing with the others, even if they are fellow professors. I always thought of Snape being more grumpy and a bit taciturn. Other than that, I do really enjoy the story.

Winry is such a selfish bitch! I get that she's proud of her creation but Ed did it to save Harry. It's like she rather Ed not tried to save Harry. Plus, Ed didn't have a choice in the matter. Herminone is also so self-righteous. She thinks she has the right to any knowledge even though its private. Harry also keeps pushing when things is obviously private. I mean what makes him think Ed has to answer him (Harry) and her (Herminone). They're so nosy!

Lacking the teacher student relationship along with Snapes demeaning and cold manner as well as the difference between a teacher and students behavior, gotta admit though still better than half the shit I've read of crossovers between the two fandoms

...You do know the twins are really tall...its...never mind, you're good, I'll say but you slip up in between

The Wizarding World and their corrupted ministry...

*sigh*

HEDWIG. IS. A. GIRL.

Aw this is cuuute...

Ed has a military uniform? I didn't know he got it tailored to his size!

YOU SPELT "PROFFESSOR" WRONG! *screams out of frustration*

Oh well...