Ok, so I'm a complete dumbass and didn't look through your lovely collection properly to see the book two. Der. Please forgive me.

I curse more in my reviews after reading your stories. I actually curse a lot in real life, but it doesn't seem to come out in written form as often.

Hm.

Anyway, I caught the distinctive TOOL feel with a few things. And I liked the extras. You and I both seem to write without any end in site by the seat of our pants. I respect that.

Hmm... do I want to try and sleep or move onto book two?

Book two.

~Cendri

$%%#$$%$% W!

Book ONE!

You can't just leave me hanging like that. Yes, you're writing other stuff and living and all that but DAMN!

/freak out

I'm calm now. Nice story. I detect a hint of self-insert with Seph (but not teh horrenbibilous Mary-Sued insert) but not overly crazily inserted. Am I making sense? Perhaps not.

I hope on whatever the hell it is that started this idea with you that you finish it. Or I will send Drakon after you or something. Gah.

~Cendri

"He forgot. How Reno. Only Reno would get into a place as serious as this, then tell you he can't remember the access code."

I just about died laughing in this chapter. Really. Woke my roommate up (cause I never sleep, I sit up at night and read stuff). She gave me the weirdest look, and all I said was, "Wings."

/Story.

Anyways, again, glad CG pointed me over to this. Can see why you don't read much, if you're churning out shit (in a good way) like this.

~Cendri

I want to have Reno's babies.

Silliness aside, you and Drakon have just converted me to liking Reno. Congrats.

~Cendri

Fucking hell... you dropped the bomb didn't you?

Geez, kids and their hormones... I'm grinning like a fool for no reason in particular. Maybe it's because this is insanely late at night, maybe because this story is just a little crazy...

I'm so glad CG recommended this.

~Cendri

Dude, this story is so messed up that I have to love it.

And I don't think your Seph is OOC. He's cocky as hell and has a bad attitude. Maybe I'm the only one that sees him that why pre "complete and total freak out".

~Cendri

Hehe, "I win." Brilliant.

Heh heh, Elevator Action...I was giggling at that title for a good five minutes after seeing the game at the mall once. Anyway, enough about *my* sick mind, let's talk about yours.

Very fascinating story. It is a lot like Cowboy Bebop, in how the there is no set plot line. The reader can't predict where the story is going, and that's a good thing. Keeps it interesting. Anyway, I'm off to go read the sequel, so later!

Heh heh, elevator...

Ah, finally got a chance to finish reading this, and I gotta previous sentiment stands. This kicks ass. Period.

That was really good. And really funny. Great job, I'm looking forward to reading the sequel.

Ass-kickingly awesome. That's all I can say about this, mainly because I have about five minutes to get to work. But that sums it up perfectly anyway.

Okay, someone's probably commented on this already and in the author's notes for the next chapter you'll go "oh my bad", but I don't care. _ I'm going to comment anyway.

In this chapter you have Seph go "I'd never killed anyone before. . ."

But in the last chapter, when describing Rolan, Seph says "I attacked a man on the street when I was drunk. Beat him to death with a steel pipe."

?

Am I misinterpreting?

Anyway. Just had to have my say. _ Love the story so far!

*bounces off to keep reading*

This was a great story! I loved the way the characters are so sarcastic. Personally I think it's OOC for all of them, but it's definitely entertaining. They're also quite realistic. Sephiroth and Aeris for example, are much more human in this fic than most others. _

The plot seemed somewhat unfocused, though. It just seemed jumpy and inconsistent. Needs a bit more direction. But it's okay since the fic is more on the lighthearted side anyways.

All in all, great job. You have a very interesting style that's fun to read.

I can sum up my feelings on this fic in two words...

Fucking. Brilliant.

I hope to see more stuff like this! Keep it up! The extras kicked ASS, You should add some bloopers or something. XD

Hmm...I feel kinda bad. I somehow completely missed this until this last chapter! So I sat and read the whole thing, because this was really good! I love how you did Sephiroth. That's about how I imagine him acting (when not running around all crazy-like). And Aeris was also nicely done. Really, this was an excellent story! I look forward to Book 2!

-Jade A.