This chapter alone made me hate this story. Too much inconsistency. Scott lost his ability to control his power from the brain injury he recieved from the plane crash. And you threw a scene from Good Will Hunting in there that completely detracted from the seriousness of the scene. You need to learn a little about righting about abuse. I'm sorry to be so frank, but it's true.

Wow. Perfect. Loved how their relationship evolved. :D

This story is definitly going straight to my favourites list, I love everything about this story. More like it soon, please?

wow...

~Red~

cool...

I love your stories and your English is really good (even from an American viewpoint). the biggest mistake I can find in this story is in the following line:

“ Ups.” Rogue smiled sheepishly. “ Got to go.”

You ment 'oops' as in 'uh oh' and you spelled it more like the oposite of down (which is up)

I love your ficcies

Thats one of the most believable S/L stories i've read XD Awesome. ~FOH.

Colour Blind

God, what a beautiful story. I sat here crying and feeling very silly about it, but it was just so good! Thank you for taking the time to write this. It really is spectacular. Kydasam

oh my, i gotta say i love this fic. it's so sweet. this is one of the best fics ive read. thank you for sharing it! ive never went 'aw' so much at once! :D

Very...I can't think of the right word but when i do I'll get back to you on it. it was a great. My heart kept jumping every time logan got defensive of scott or they kissed (though that may be because I am slightly addicted to the male/male relationships... Hey the way I see it admitantice is the first step to recovery) But either way I loved the portrayl of their relationship.

~BlackCat9~

P.S. On how English not being your native langauge don't worry. Your spelling is excellent.

Bad Jack.*kills Jack* Bad, bad Jack. Should give him to Saruman to experiment on. HAHA.

I like this. :)

my first x-men fic and boy was i lucky to chose this story :) it was... inspiring. makes me want to spend what's left of the night writing stories of my own instead of going to bed :)

Aww! I like Logan being protective. And the way Storm is watching over them. I like it. I swear, next review I will have something more constructive to say!

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*big, squishy hugs* thank you so much for informing me sweetheart... i wouldn't have missed this conclusion for anything!

*aah* that was so incredibly touching... i love how you translated Logan's possessiveness into love, an unbelievably sweet, heartrending love... i adore how they comforted each other throught their nightmares and trusted each other to help them through it... and *sobs* poor Scott... his vulnerablity was so heartwrenching... i love, love, love this fic! :)