Finally I have finished the whole story! Thank u so much for writing us this story, the plot was very interesting . And we got to see an Elsa who has a strong and masculine personality always protecting the people around her. But also with a tinge of vulnerability , her strength being carried out by Anna during these moments of. I hope that the other countries will come to light at how wrong they are for treating them this way

Well ok, found another reference in this chapter. Honestly, i'm not reading the whole story, I just happened upon this story. But the more I read, I have to agree with the others who disapprove of your biblical references in this story. It is most certainly not a christian story, and I have to wonder why you choose to incorporate biblical elements in such a story as this.
As the Bible also states "light has no fellowship with darkness." Be careful in what regard you use God's Word. You are incorporating it into a story full of swearing, and sexual relations that the Bible states is abominable ( incest, lesbianism). You are defiling the Word of God by doing this. Please stop.

I find it interesting that you put elements of the crucifixion of Christ in chapters 10 and 11. I found quite a few actually. There is the obvious flogging, that guy asking Elsa to remember him when she retakes her kingdom (thief on the cross), Elsa saying "My God, my God, why have you forsaken me?", and then in chapter 11, elsa saying "I thirst.", and the drink that she gets is sour, and then saying that she's had nothing to eat or drink since supper the night before (the last supper).
That's about all I found, did I miss any? Is there any certain reason you put these elements in? I'm curious.

Dejando de lado los comentarios autistas de algunos que solo insultan,tu historia es realmente buena,aunque el concepto de la violación pues no me gusto !NADA¡ pero yo digo que si hay amor todo se puede. :

As a Christian I don’t like your reference to the Bible in Chapter 10

NOOO YOU MUST MARRY AND FALL IN LOVE! Wait a second... they already fell in love, wait...what? I'm not even sure what I'm saying right now...ok bye...

THE HORROR! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! WHYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!? STUPID ULFRIC SOUNDS LIKE THE NAME OF SOMEONE UGLY UGH, NOOOOOOO STUPID STUPID ULFRIC AND HIS STUPID IDEAS AND AND AND...I DON'T KNOW! STUPID ULFRIC!

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO SAAAAAAAAADDDDDDD NOOOOOOWWWWWWW

Sweet and sexy, want moar!

:)

ouoluiotui

I see the reference to Matthew 27:46 in this chapter, though I have to say that, as a Christian, I do not approve of your use of this passage in a Disney, M rated fanfiction.

Die in hell bastard, burn in hell for what you have done!

Chapter 10... CHAPTER 10! YOU GOD DAMN FUCKING PIECE OF SHIT. HOW DARE YOU? HOW IN OBLIVION DARE YOU TO WRITE THIS SHIT?! HOW DARE YOU HARLOT TO JUST THINK ABOUT THIS?! DIE IN HELL YOU BASTARD!
Do you know what darkweb is? Scarry place but pretty insteresting though and useful if you know where to go and have some friends. Man, I'm hiring a Hitman on you. And be sure he will not just kill you, no. You wrote your fate already ,my friend. First, he will give you a roman standard (sounds familiar you cunt?!) Then, if you will be still alive, he's gonna rape your girl right in front of you. And then, slowly, slowly let you bleed out while watching him fuck you beloved literally to deadth. Cause thats what you deserve. And she will beg and cry and yell your name into the darkness... but your broken body will refuse to move, you dirty hands you used do commit this shit will be cutted off and the wounds burned with hot iron so you wont die so quickly and you will scream too. In excuting pain, you will watch your world to disapper while thinking... I thought it was just some crazy hater, how the hell he found who am I? (SQLmap, database, email with a picture, IP adress and boom i know where you live. YOU HEAR ME?! GO CHECK WHAT EMAILS YOU OPENED RECNTLY YOU BITCH!) And she will scream and her blood will spill to the ground letting you taste a real disaster, while he will ravage her again... again... and again.. and for a while you will think, what's worse? The pain from you destroyed bloody back and from your sinner hands now being eaten by a dog, or the look at your love, your innocent little girl payimg such a horrible fee for your stupidity, like you let Anna?
The internet my friend, is a weapon. I am not exactly short on money, I've been mining bitcoins since my 14, so now it's good time to use them.

That was a great, dark story. It's obvious that 'Frozen Fractals' inspired you but that is a good thing. I liked your depiction of Elsa, that she isn't afraid to use her power to defend others and don't shy away to kill her enemies if she has to.
The ending is overloaded with foreshadowing, it doesn't look good at all for Arendelle. It smells like war and treason. I wouldn't mind to read a sequel.