Hope to read more soon.

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Hope to read more soon.

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Lol I couldn't stop laughing at the guy-rabies!

love love love LOOOOVE THIIIIS

I think that rewriting the story is a good and bad idea. I think it is good because now your get to go more in depth with the characters and we get to know more about their backstory. It is bad because we have to wait just a little to get the story, but I think we all support your decision because I the end you are the author of the story and it is your decision. Good luck with the writing of the rewrite.

FAM U DEAD PLS UPDATE I NEED MORE

Holy moly ... Brain fried

Omg I love this story and really really really hope you'll continue it!

Please continue! I'm really loving this fic!

Please continuebthe story. Its great

LANA DEL REY

Update freaking now...please

Great story so far! I like the idea of her hair being white. Personally, I picture Ari as Daenerys Targaryen from Game of Thrones. And Typos don't usually bother me, but there was this one sentence that I had no idea what to make of. "He breath came in my pants". It's where she was listening in on Pan and Felix talking about Bae. I just wanted to let you know it was there because it's kind of confusing and I have no idea what it means.

What the actual fuck?! Okay, first of all, I'm confused as hell on several things. One, did she get revenge on her uncle for killing her parents and selling her? Is she immortal? Is she Peter Pan's true love or is he just majorly obsessed with her because of the deal her parents made with him? Etc, etc. There is a lot of unanswered questions in this story and some things don't make any damn sense because of the unfulfilled time gaps. So, will you have your answers in the story if you ever decide to update?

OMG! This is amazing story! You have to update REALLY SOON! :)