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  Johanna chapter 13 . 5/15/2018 Cc je te réécrit car plus de nouvelle. Jespere que tous va bien et que le fais que tu n'écrit plus soit un manque d'inspiration et que rien d'horrible ne soit arrivée dans ta vie. Sa va faire presque 1ans que les aventure d alan a poudlar sont arrête et sa me manque. Je passe régulièrement voir si des mise a jour sont faite mais bon je suis tres patiente et fidèle au histoires que j'aime ! |
| Johanna chapter 13 . 4/21/2018 Hello L histoire est plutôt bien. J aimerai savoir pourquoi alan n essaye pas de recontacter sa famille ? Est ce que jeff et remus se rencontreront ? Alan sera t il blessé dan l attaque du ministere ? J ai hâte de connaitre la suite meme si lrs chapitre sont long dans la mise a jour je revien régulièrement sur ton histoire |
| johanna chapter 13 . 8/18/2017 Hello Your style of writing is easy to read The story goes well, when is that alan revisits his family? |
| johanna chapter 12 . 8/4/2017 Good fanfiction, I hope you will succeed at the end ;) I read it long time ago, I'm glad you're following the story :) |
 The rising dawn 133 chapter 11 . 8/8/2016 MORE! |
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/7/2016 PLEASE UPDATE! |
| The rising dawn 133 chapter 7 . 1/23/2016 I love it please continue writing |
| Mickiecuteknight chapter 4 . 5/28/2015 I hope you continue this story. I like to know if Alan ever sees his family again. |
| Sad-Blue-Eyed-Angel 2010 chapter 8 . 5/31/2014 Nice chapter. I can't wait to see how Alan handles his other classes. |
| Sad-Blue-Eyed-Angel 2010 chapter 7 . 4/9/2014 *pouty face* Poor Alan! Can't wait until you update next! |
| xox-hatmadder24 chapter 6 . 2/20/2014 Cool chapter! If you want to take the offer up just let me know! ;) Not that your writings bad *stammers awkwardly*, just I love little details and extra bits and bobs everywhere in a story, just more info (I'm a Ravenclaw at heart but the test says I'm a Gryff so...) Still, PM me if you do want to take the offer ;) I'd be glad to do it for any story you write. I'm too lazy to write my own but love editing things. I literally go insane if somebody misses something out their writing (Middle of an English Lesson, for the 60th time that day: "MISS HUBRECHT! YOU MISSED OUT A COMMA!" To girl next to me: "And she calls herself an English Teacher..." *insert smug look* ;) |
| Sad-Blue-Eyed-Angel 2010 chapter 6 . 2/20/2014 Entertaining story to read...can't wait to see what else you get written. |
| xox-hatmadder24 chapter 5 . 2/2/2014 Cool, although it seems a bit rushed (please don't kill me). Still really entertaining to read. By the way, I'd be glad to help if I can, like for example I could add in a few more details and such and make it seem less rushed, you know, a bit like a beta ;) PM me if you do want help. Looking forward to Chapter 6! |
| xox-hatmadder24 chapter 3 . 1/23/2014 Really cool :) Please update date |
| FabinaForever11 chapter 4 . 1/15/2014 Awesome!:) |
