Looking forward to reading more! :)

:)

I am really enjoying this fic! It has a lot of potential and I'd love to see what you do with it. Edward is all kinds of lovely; I can see that he's the kind of man Bella needs in her life already. Jacob seems to be a total PITA. Thank you sweetie! XXOO

Not a good idea if the boyfriend is an abuser :/ Looking forward to more :)

A bit? No. Any guy who hits and chokes
his woman is not worthy the title 'Man.'
Calling him an ass is too kind, IMHO.
I like your apparently BrokeWard! I look
forward to more!

You know, each and every new story I start reading these days scare me. The Edwards are usually manwhores and the Bellas are wimps but hey, what the heck...I'm going to give this a shot and hope for the best hahaha

I wanted to keep reminding Bella to not forget her cake :)

I'm loving it already. Jacob does sounds like an ass. I can't wait to read whats going to happen next. Please update soon.

Well Jacob sounds like a total pig. I hope Bella comes to her senses sooner rather than later.
Great start, looking forward to reading more (:

I think Edward is going to grow on me, and I know I already hate Jacob. Bella needs a real man in her life, preferably the one she just met. Please keep going! Thank you! XXOO

I like this a lot!
Bella better be careful. She thinks Jake won't come home during the day. If he does, there will be hell to pay.
Liked the backstory on Bella and Jake, and where Edward had been previously. He seemed happy to be here, even though he has nothing.