Next please.

Gud going;-)

I'm certainly going to keep an eye out ;D ! I was so happy for an update and to see some questions I had answered :) ! I understand how real life gets in the way and you just become busy. So I'm happy whenever you can update and won't pressure you to update faster than your able :) ! Get some R and R ! Bye!

You caught the atmosphere of the song It is what it is. Just keep going the way you're going. it would be good to between actions throw a little more emotional states of the main characters. I hope that Riki become a bridge between the two brothers. It would be nice if they in one moment come to the promised sea coast.

Awesome love it

I do not often write reviews of the stories that I read. The truth is that I'm angry at writers who do not finish their stories. That's why I criticized you. But only you. I did it because your story is one of the best I have ever read. You are very gifted writer and I'm sorry becouse you do not have more time to write. Life is a thief that steals our time. Your beautiful story deserves even more beautiful conclusion and the end that much as you deserve my patience. I apologize for the error in writing. English is not my native language. I wish you all the best in their future work.

Awesome...this is one amazing fic... I hope u will update it soon.
I really love it.

Please do not stop writing. I am really looking forward to the rest of the story, as well as for To Forgive and Forget. I am waiting for the next chapter :)

I realy like your work. Your work is good and interesting. but big problem is that you never finished what you start. It is not ok. It is not important how many people read or like your work. Do not start something and than stop beafore the and.

ahhhh i really need to know the conclusion of this, I am literally sitting on the edge of my seat, good job keep up the good work

Please tell me more chapters are on the way. You have woven a unique storyj leading us on a merry chase. Within the Ai no Kushiba world but completely new and unto itself. Hopefully at some point you can delve into the history of Blondie twins. That they love and hate each other with such veracity. The possibilities appear to be endless.
So want to were your imagination an talent lead.
Sincerely Mac

Enjoyed this story. Was there more or the ending published elsewhere ?
Would s enjoy reading more f this tale.
My Thanks

such a cliffhanger *o* cant wait for updates!

What next! Ahh...! I can't wait for the next chapter. :)

please update soon, i cant wait for more~