I liked it a lot! it had a nice surprise ending! I wish you would write more like these!

Very interesting. I like the idea of them finding out how they really feel about each other due to Natsu going to Gray just to get away from Lucy for a little bit until she cools down. But I get the feeling that Natsu won't really want to go back to her now that he has Gray, lol.

Really, I liked this. It was cute, funny, passionate and a decent length overall. The plot, dialogue, setting and general in-characterness of Natsu and Gray was all good and I don't really have much to complain about. There WERE some occasional spelling/grammar errors, but honestly, nothing too bad.

Good job with this, and keep up the good work! :)

Nice one, Loved the ending XD

I would so love if you wrote one of Natsu topping I would so read it and I would like more of this story please.

Now that's a good story I liked how you put more than just the main characters in there like hibiki anyway thanxs for the good read:D

Lol I sort of expected the ending ;)
Nice one shot.