So! I was looking for a good-sized fic to read and this caught my attention. Let me tell you, I was NOT disappointed! I'm loving it so far! It totally makes sense for Shippo to go from seeing her as a mom to seeing her as a potential lover! And the way that you give details about your OC's appearance, not all at once but casually dropped around the story, is so refreshing! I know that she's a half-water elemental with two-tone hair that wears black and I don't have to read a block of text to know this This was such a good first chapter! I can'twait to go on!

So Kagome is targeted one way or another and the only clear thing is that the enemy wants her to suffer. Still, a waiting game is worse than an actual attack in a way.

Well, this confirms Hiei being the male lead, poor Shippo. Her dream was disturbing but I see how useful Hiei felt with this task.

Hiei is the male lead right? Aww I wanted Shippo to be the one but well, it wouldn't be a crossover then would it?

This is an interesting plot, Kagome making a refuge in the future for the lost and wandering that don't feel they have a place regarding the supernatural. Though it's strange only two people so far are regular residents (Shippo doesn't count). I really like how Shippo is seeing Kagome in this new light and how his over the top flirting is ironically what makes her believe he is just joking around. And Hiei, well, it's nice that he found a place in ningenkai for him to call somewhat home. Riana, is an OC and her personality is nice.

This is so great! Thanks

Please update soon

Please update when you can

I absolutely love these two together. Perfect awesome fic. I cannot believe a fox could be behind this. I need more when you can. I have a few fics not updated in a few years, so I totally understand.

I'm hoping it won't be another 2 years as well I would like to see how this story will go and how it will end as well as who is causing this. It will be upsetting if it was one of the foxes but I don't think it could be but it is your story so there is no telling. Please update soon.

I am really glad you are getting back to this one. I greatly enjoy it.

I hope the spit storms leave u alone, plz update soon also this story is really good.

Well Heavens girl! It’s about time...giggle! But goodness, I didn’t have to go back and reread any chapters to remember what was happening. So that says a lot. Thanks for a wonderful hot update. Things are really getting ugly though. Hope you update soon.

Love it! Can’t wait to see how Kagome and Hiei’s relationship keeps evolving~

Woah, this is getting intense and I'm loving it! XD

I'm so glad I decided to read through your story again when I noticed the update, the last time I reviewed this story was exactly four years ago to this date (I checked, hehe~ ;)

In my last review, I mentioned Ukaran being Naraku's name backwards, is he perchance Naraku's reincarnation without being evil and all that? And about his two friends that appeared in chapter 11, Sumo and Nigo, I noticed that the names are similar to 'Muso' (if you change the spelling) and 'Onigumo' (again, if you change the spelling and get rid of a few letters), are they reincarnations too? There's a lot of reincarnations popping up if that's the case (not counting Kagome herself), you already mentioned Mukotsu's reincarnation...

I can't believe that you put suspicions on both foxes! In some ways I can see why, but I just don't want Kurama or Shippo to be the bad guy.

Sure Kurama could be cunning and sadistic to a point, but what demon is not either of those, and besides, how could he be the one who's after Kagome when he's only known her for four years and the bad guy's known about her for a long time? Kurama's also very loyal to his friends, especially Hiei. I can't see him being manipulated either, he's too smart for that... And Shippo, it's possible he could be manipulated, after all, 500 years has passed and that should be more than enough time for someone to slowly gain control of Shippo without notice.

Hmm~ I'm curious about Kagome's age (and the others too), is she in her twenties? And is Hiei taller than Kagome? Lolol, I wanna know XD

Oh! And when is Sesshoumaru making his appearance? I hope it's soon.

I'm anxiously waiting for all the mysteries to unravel and find out who's after Kagome! I'm looking forward to your next update no matter how long it takes! Take your time and good luck in your writing!