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your spelling and punctuation gave me full-fledged cancer. Did you ever pass the third grade? I loved the story, because of the plot and the details. WORK ON GRAMMAR!

Flame prince, gumball, Marshall and fionna please!

Continue please and let there be some time skip do fionna get pregnant with a baby girl by marshal and then gumball but miscarries gumball child and her and Marshall get together and live happy ever after

This Is really cool and I love it to be honest but it was just missing something idk what but yeah!

you should write the living crap out of this fanfic. thats just my opinion

OMG! I LOVED THIS FAN FICTION! PLEASE UPDATE! I NEED MOOOOOORRRRREEEE!

I think she's already pregnant and that's why she has a crazy craving's and is super horney.

very good but next can you do flame Prince and fionna

Fionna and FP! Or Fionna marshal AND FP

Ok I still hate Gumball.
I don't know why put now I hate him more because Fionna said the rest is history.
FIOLEE FOREVE BETCHES!
(No Gummy Bunny)

Plz write more, i have a lot of (personal) reasons for u to write more, plz plz plz! Marshall Lee and Fiona

I wanna see some Gumball x Marshall slash XD and have Fionna come in and be like Oh my glob!Wtf boys!? Now I have to punish you...

Please update soon :'C
I'm looking forward to read the next! *-*

its good