Great beginning...i really enjoyed every second of the chapter, CONGRATULATIONS!

Excellent story. Read it in one sitting. A great job of detailing the fall and redemption of Kim Possible. Where would she be if Ron hadn't forgiven her and became the driving force behind her redemption?

"This is Bambi Newberry of NewsTruth TV. Today, former adventurer and America's Sweetheart, Kim Possible, was found dead in her bathtub due to self inflicted wounds. There will be no funeral service because she was estranged from family and friends. Back to you, Cliff."

A great story showing how two immature kids manage to become adults during the worst of times.

So, as Hancock would say, "Good Job."

I have no idea how the "follow" feature didn't work for this one. Glad to see you wrap it up; well done. And on to the continuation (which I have already reviewed).

Absolutely brilliant! Fantastically detailed work! great characters, compelling story, and a nice cliffhanger. Can't wait for more!

This has been a fantastic story so far, can't wait to keep reading! I'm now starting to get a feel for where we're heading, with a little redemption on the cards. Loved some of the humour you snuck in as well. Genuinely laughed at the Miley references and Wade's suss reaction to not having seen Kim's photos. Great Job!

Whoa, scary.

keep the good writing.

Sounds like major things have been happening in Kim and Ron's old world that hopefully, they'll be returning to shortly. I can only imagine who this threat Trep was talking about is. Nice epilogue and I look forward to the actual "Kim Possible Rides Again" story.

Oh coolio Wade's in with GJ 'cause he got bored? Anyway maybe it gets messier and messier.

Nice update, too bad our former heroes are well former heroes.

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And while bonds are reforged, a world waiting for them is still turning.

CB73

Interesting...

Love the epilogue for this story.
Kim realizing how important Ron is to her and she knowing he feels the same.

She's on a good start to being an adult and owning up to mistakes and responsibilities.
But the best part it they are together again, and stronger than ever.

Thanks for taking the time and effort to come up with this story and running with it to completion.

Hey, pretty cool job here.

Keep the good writing.

Why did the mother confront Kim? that's not her business on what her TWENTY year old son was doing.

So with the major sitches out of the way, the couple can now get on with college.

Well Hot Rod, it seems that you're getting ready to go into the meat of the tale now. It's hard to believe you were able to pull off breaking Kim and Ron up the way you did and then bring them back together in eleven chapters covering about 2 years...bravo.

I can't wait to see the rest of it since I've probably favorited all the art work.

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