I hope you update soon look like it has potential.

interesting start

This is definitely interesting, I hope you continue this

Yay new chapter! But first a rescue and now a picnic...I'm a bit lost lol. Haha can't wait to see where this goes! :D

Knock knock, anyone home? Intriguing start and I was wondering if there was a story here?

I'm really hoping this isn't going to be a 1 shot, it has the makings of a great story. Looking forward to more.

i really hope you update soon, you write well and this story line has the promisings of a good fanfic! (plus I adooooore Five/Rose lol) love the cover art! :D

Ooh, a mystery. (Well, a mystery for Five and Peri, not so much for us.) Anyway, looks interesting, looking forward to more.
By the by, before I forget, on your profile, it says "I ship Doctor/Rose like FedEx" (or something to that extent). Do you mind if I borrow it?

Oooh please update soon, this looks interesting :3

This is awesome, I can't wait to read more. I was afraid it was a one shot, but then I saw that picture... Can't wait!

Interesting start! Loved the reference to Harry Potter lol. Hope you update some more soon.