Yeah, this sucks.

Man, your writing sucks dude. Seriously mind control ? Is that the best you could imagine for your story?

sorry this fic is not for me

hate mind control.
rapist naruto

I liked the epilogue.

sir i like it even when Naruto get to took out his ninjas vaillge too and 2 as for the lemony sir i Robert Krause was think of more when he go to the lands of waves sir and buy out the old vaillge and made a base for him to used when made a think tank co to took over , when he had find a hiding lab when you made solders and army s too , the 1 thing i will do is to find ad of now kill ninjas grils form the past and get them back like his ex tame met ion and ten-ten and made them looking likes more of she hulks grils with big muslces and green skins too , as for the others not so much too, when this not spamming you sir i Robert Krause i am a fan of you sir

I thought they would at least have kids

Your mother was a dead cunt. Both in bed and family-wise. Good lord did she spout about wishing she aborted you. A disappointment and a loser. It was horrible pillow talk. Granted, she wished I gave her a superior child, and hoped you'd drop dead somewhere. If that bitch is still croaking, tell her I had fun. You fag.

when Naruto and his lover/sexpet Lara had be home for when the 2 doing 2 big bed rooms when Lara had her and was sleep off now Naruto on the other hand had get his hands on some mob money and took out the mob boss Rick ford out kill him off with a gun now and siting in his chire now and seeing the men 2 men made them go out now you fools and get hot grils now and then kill you silfes now i now own it all now and when the 2 doing it now Naruto meeting them one is big bods and hire now pick hair made her sit on the bed now and his hands no her now and feeling her now and then the other one too red hair one too and her by him and his big mod out to her took in the milk now and saying to them i having a good time now you 2 are my sex pets now , when in time Naruto made more money form it all mob boss get took out and money he took now , muslces on him super size now and grils form the mob boss now his own now ,

when in some red light city Naruto had be to on some bussies he took out a mob boss cap and his top boss out then he be siting in the men old office when looking over it Naruto took over the men co and he had now a big size thus army now and when then he made them doing his working now took out others mobs boss and having the money now Naruto had 2 hot elf grils siting in his new car now siting with him now and sex was on now both grils can feeling in now and when siting now he off now and both grils happy now for the big muslces fox men is now them owner now ,so lord Naruto why is you ornerd now ,well grils you 2 with me now as for you ex boss and his men are now kill off now , and when then to his night club now ,when the 3 meeting some others he took out and seeing other hot gril who is now under his power now a Yewollwer hire gril with big bobs out to him now and sex with her is good now ,when going over the men old home art he took and sold and some old art of his old life he took now , he find out it form the Sakrar own frilmy and now it is my now ,

when Naruto 1 took out some mob boss out and his top boss too when siting on his new thore chir now and seeing his army it working now ,Naruto had the men woman 4 of them gaving him sex now feeling it now all of the time his be going out now muslces no him and one gril with her bobs out too he feeing it now say to her you hot gril and now you my gril yes my lord Naruto and when in time the city fell down and when into his new car Naruto be seeing it now with 2 elf s grils with him too and now the 2 love him more for he kill off the grils old boss and his thugs army too ,when seeing them he think back to ion and sand gril now ,when the 2 had think he kill off too the 2 he doing to doing he say you 2 are my now ,when in the up floor ware house Naruto put in a bed cub size too with a big size bed and he made them go to bed with him and his cock out now and both grils get now feeing it now ,why about a army my lord Naruto ,he say all in good time grils ,1 he get the cops under his payroll now some 4 mob cops he working with dv Robert Krause a cooker cop and his cop pather bill Leroy fox ,form the west side of the city and form the sounder side is 2 cops form hell kid jack and Dan who had working with Naruto before over took out the lords of mob years back , when then Naruto be help out with all kinds of money made away now , his money now super size now , with his elf s grils and some some others Naruto had his home now .

Your story became a pathetic piece of shit when naruto used kotoamatsukami or whatever the illusion is on women.

I understand Naruto is technically a demon in this fic. But I was not expecting, nor amused by what could be considered legally as rape.

There were dozens of different angles you could have taken that could lead to what can be considered a healthy relationship. But having Lara endure Sharingan equivalent of drug facilitated sexual assault is not appropriate.

boooooooooooooo more

Yeah. Use and boom - any women will be his. What kind of shitty story is this without any interesting encounters. It would have been actually good if the women were fiesty.