That was beautiful.

fabulous.

Amazing. I loved it. A nice happy ending. Presumably followed by a lifetime of PTSD and dysphoria. I can't imagine how many times Homura is going to wake up in a panic. Hopefully Madoka is there to hold her. And of course I'm sure it'll be very strange to no longer have awareness of most of the universe (or indeed have something like 30 years old memories while being 14). So I look forward to the long, loooong road to recovery.

Maybe Sayaka can have a polyamorous relationship with Kyoko and Mami. I suppose she deserves to be happy. Even if she always makes a mess of things.

I like the twist with that Incubator. I mean, I still wanted the devil Homura and goddess Madoka do something cool, but that would have probably been over the top. And PMMM isn't about meaningless over the top action. I just hope the Incubators don't exist anymore, because fuck 'em.

Anyways, nice work! I really enjoyed it!

Awww. That was too easy. I was expecting something much more epic. I mean, it was epic, but i never had any point Sayacuck would win. And I really wanted to see Devil Homura awaken or something. Maybe the last chapter will have that.

Also Michi saving everyone with Walpurgisnacht? I like the idea! Seems good. I was wondering how you were going to pull off saving the universe. Although a part of me was hoping they'd fail and Homura and Madoka would be together forever.

Ok phew. I was worried that Warukuchi had actually betrayed Homura. Fortunately that is not the case. I mean, she has betrayed her, but she hasn't. It's more like she believes Homura has betrayed herself, so she is saving her. I like that twist. It's much better than if she had just decided to overthrow her or something like that. She believes she's doing what is "right". I say right, but by that I mean what Homura originalpy wanted. A gay universe for her to be gay with Madoka. Lel

Hmmm... That's quite the surprise. I didn't think any of the Clara Dolls would actually plot against Homura, let alone Warukuchi. I suppose it's possible that she's acting on behalf of Devil Homura rather than normal Homura. And Homucifer wants to have total control and since that's who Warukuchi likes, she's doing what she can to permanently awaken her or something. I'll be very surprised if it's purely out of her own desire. The Clara Dolls are after all manifestations of different parts of Homura, and while they may hate her and and mock her and such, at the end of the day they are part of her.

I feel like the "Curb Your Enthusiasm" song should be playing 24/7 around Sayacuck. She really is a dope. I make fun of her as a character a lot, but I don't dislike her tbh. I think she's a very cool and well done character. I like her a lot. But she is really effin dumb lol

Oh dear. Homura will not be pleased.

Ahhhh I get it. The laugh they make when they're all together is the Walpurgisnacht laugh. That's a good one, that is! I wonder if Homura will get to Lorelei and Ligaya first. I kinda hope so, cuz I root for her after all.

Sayaka was Madoka's head of the Angel people, right? Michi was No.2, etc, right? I think Madoka made a mistake with that, cuz jeez Sayaka is such a dumbass. Her line "I'm really stupid" seems to hold true everywhere. How is Nagisa so much better at critical thinking? I'm sure this "nuclear deterrent" will work really well. Threatening Homura with your witch before worked out so well, didn't Sayaka. It's not like she just clapped it out of existence or anything. Something tells me it doesn't really matter how many witches they have, Homura will still just clapped them out of existence.

Honestly, the only thing that bothers me is what I'd describe as an incongruence between the scale of the various aspects of the story. Homura is the devil and sort of controls the entire universe, yet she also has to put effort into making just the earth work? What about the billion trillion stars and planets in the rest of the universe. And considering the existence of the Incubators, that means that there is other life in the universe which means that there are presumably many species Homura is making sure survive.

Also, I always got the impression that the entropy the Incubators referred to was the eventual heat death of the universe, but that is decillions of years away. It seemed that they thought on a much longer time scale and we're genuinely concerned about the universe ending I'm an incomprehensibly long time. So for the universe to be about to end is a bit confusing to me. Pheraps the energy expended for Madokas wish was actually so great that it shortened the amount of time before all atoms just started collapsing to literally a few years. I guess that would explain it.

I also thought that Homura didn't really have a traditional Soul Gem anymore. And since it had been "corrupted" by love, I didn't think it could be tainted by anything else. It reached maximum taint. That is a horrible sentence that I regret typing

Despite all these little complaints of mine, that doesn't mean I dislike this story. I love it. It's one of the best works of fic I've ever read tbh. I just like giving my two cents or whatever. I really hope it goes more into the whole Goddess being different than Madoka thing. After all, the devil is a separate entity from Homura and both Homura and the Devil talked about Madoka being sort of a captive of the goddess being.

I Remain,
Spooths

Poor Warukuchi just got cucked. Sucks to be a sadistic kill doll, eh?

I really like your take on the Devil and Homura being separate entities. I've always imagined them being one, but I think it's a very cool thing and I especially like the whole thing with Homura trying to prevent the end of the universe by denying the Devil full control.

I imagine that even if the Devil we're to destroy the universe, Madoka would not be killed. After all, Madoka is all that matters. Just Madoka. Just Madoka. just Madoka.

And honestly, I don't think that Madoka would forgive Homura. That's just how she is. Especially towards Homora.

I Remain,
Spooths

Need more cute Madohomu moments ;-; please let there be more

Sayacuck tripping at the first hurdle there with Elise already chillin' with Michi and such. Also, I don't remotely buy the Incubators being in any way repentent or remorseful. They're clever little bastards with a huge mind and I don't doubt for a moment they will betray Sayaka when it's beneficial.

Alright. Homura is not omniscient or at least aware of pretty much everything. I'm surprised she doesn't have more... things out in the world. It seems that all of the Clara dolls are right in Mitakihara. Does Homura have more dolls spread out around the world? Or are there more "familiar type" things? Does she even monitor the entire world? She is much more like a god than Madoka, as she is actively participating in the world, so I'd expect her be able to observe the earth if not the entire universe. But I guess if Homura truly had the powers of a god there wouldn't be much story. She'd just clap her hands and everything would be fine.

It feels foolish to bring so many of the magical girls together in one place. The chance of them rebelling against her rebellion are greatly increased. Then again, the whole point was to give everyone the chance at a happy, normal, life and splitting them apart would really let that happen.

Still, I feel like she should be wiping their minds. By doing what she did to Elise and Michi, she has taken that happy life from them. Even if Michi made the choice, Homura doesn't much care for other people's decisions because her decisions are best decisions. North Homura best Homura and all that.

Also, Homucifer, you go girl! Win so you can luminous with Madoka.