Good story. I love that they got happy end.

I really love your/this story! It's really amazing,lovely and heart touching! GREAT/AMAZING JOB!

*Cheer* I FINALLY FOUND IT! :D I once read this a long time ago; but the only part I could recall was Ace and Sabo watching Luffy break down on Lily Island. *Frustrated at her bad memory problem* THANK YOU! :3

I LOVE IT!

I recommend this story. I really enjoyed the plot and how the characters where used and the personalities. But also the ending, it was unexpected but a good way of finishing the story off

I guess it's true what they say. The past always comes back to haunt you. No matter how hard you try to make your history buried, it comes back just as hard. Seems that this memory loss isn't under the gone forever label. It's with the theory that memories and thoughts are never gone. Just swept under the carpet. I love your work and am looking forward to this!

I feel like the start was (as Franky would say) suuuper! However the last two -three chapters were kinda idk less super?

This was effing amazing! I know this was written ages ago but I love it so much.. I've never laughed, cried and been so happy in such a short amount of time (except for watching the actual show ofc!) this was amazing! Can't believe how good it was.

very well, I love the plots and a happy ending.

You... You just butchered Luffy's personality in less than 200 words. Why would Luffy join Whitebeard... Why would he agree to join under someone's fleet... Since when did he want to be an underling... Why would he agree to be restrained by another captain... Even tho this was before 799 it still ain't an excuse. I think you just stole away Luffy's freedom lmao

wow. This was amazing! But there are a couple small details I'm confused about. First up is the bakery lady. Where on earth did she go? Second is amelia. You said she forgot something but what? Small details, I know but that doesn't make me any less curious.

Interesting story, and certainly didn't go where I was expecting in the beginning. I greatly enjoyed reading it although I found the description to be occassionally bulky and excessive in some cases. Luffy also seemed a bit OOC at times, particularly some of the bits in the ending, although certainly an interesting direction to take it in. I particularly enjoyed when you brought in the older Sabo, as that ended up as an unexpected and ultimately very exciting development. Overall, good job. Thank you for writing and posting!

Magnificent story

Please update this amazing story and thank you for making this story

Please update this story