As promised: Kitty is back with a review of the last 2 chapters. :D

I really liked the conversation between Akito and Shinu, and I feel like, with a little more...persuasion, Akito will end up joining the Savers.
It's good that Ryoko is feeling better and the Blade Children are back together. I really like how they all manage to be (kind of) normal students, despite all the threats to their lives. I'm curious about what Sai is planning to do, though. And what's up with Shinu? He seems fishy.

Well then, see you next time!

Hi there! Kitty is back.
First of all, sorry for not reviewing chapter 32. Between university graduation, concerts/festivals and starting a new job, fanfiction was kind of pushed to the back of my mind, haha.
Secondly, thank you for mentioning you have the end of the story already sketched in your mind, which took away my fear of it ever being abandoned. But with so much shit going on in the world (shootings, crimes, hurricanes, wildfires...), the fear of something bad haplening to the author is still there. Maybe you could make another work, something like a diary where you give little updates once in a while? In that way your readers will know you're alive and healthy if longer periods pass between chapters.
Finally, about your request: the idea of making an account doesn't really appeal to me, but if you would like to keep in touch and are comfortable with it, you can shoot me an email on (not my main address, so it's no problem for it to be out in public, haha)
This message was just to answer the aurhors' notes, now I'm off to read chapters 32 and 33 and will come back with another review. Good luck and lots of productivity in your writing!

Hello hello!
I hope you're healthy and doing well
I just wanted to ask you to please not give up on this story...or at the very least to make an announcement if you did give up :(
Even if the fandom is as good as dead, this story has at least 3 constant readers: me & 2 of my friends, who also fell in love with it. Even though they don't like commenting on stuff, they are there lurking, reading and enjoying the awesomeness that is your creation.
Looking forward to reading some more, hopefully!
Hugs and cookies,
Kitty

First of all, happy (belated) new year! May your 2019 be full of inspiration and awesome experiences.

Second, it was great getting to read 2 chapters at once. I feel like something even bigger is going to happen in a little while. Is Kirie going to join the Savers? Are the Hunters going to finally defeat the Balde children? Is Kiyotaka going to make another appearance? And what about our little Hackerman?

Also, I already hate that Shinu guy XD

Oh, the tension... I love it! The big fight is soooo close.
Now I can barely wait 3 more weeks, though.
Keep up the greatness, muffin!

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Yasss, thanks so much for the new chapter! It was really nice and it feels like the action is speeding up again, too. I'm a very happy kitty now. *goes to finish her own stories, patiently waiting for the next chapter...or 28th of August to nag you with some more comments*

Please please please don't give up on this story... it's amazing and you left it on a cliffhanger, please post another chapter soon... *teary puppy eyes*

There is no "sha" sound in japanese, which makes the name Hoshagi seem invented by someone who doesn't know much about the language (not saying that you are like that, no offense). Hosagi or Hoshigai sounds more "accurate" so to speak, while not changing much your original idea. Just a little suggestion, in case you are willing and have time to take it into accound

First of all, I love this story and am always looking forward to every new chapter!

Second, I think that involving another group pretty much on the Blade Children's side would make things a little too balanced (2 groups on each side). Maybe later on, after a big confrontation and loss for the BC (many injured, idk) the Savers could step in to help.

Thank You for publishing chapter 22 Confessions ...I enjoy your writings very much and appreciate the time and effort you put into them ! Life can get busy but you never let us down or disappoint us with the quality of your chapters ! Personally I would like to see the focus on the Blade children and Ayumu's involvement with them only ...just me but I can easily become confused with to many characters ! Thank You again for a very well written chapter ! Already looking forward to Chapter 23 ...

Hi Spiral ...so sorry to hear that this is the last chapter for awhile, but I do understand why ! Time is very precious these days ! I will look forward to future chapters but will wait patiently until they are available ! As for chapter 21 I really enjoyed it very much ! I couldn't read fast enough to see what was going to happen next ! Again you end with a cliff hanger just to keep your readers wondering ! You are very good with that technique ! I loved your description that is another technique you excel at ... I feel like I am actually watching a movie rather than reading a story with words ! YOU ARE A WONDERFUL WRITER ...Thank You for sharing the 21 chapters you have shared so far ! I will wait as long as it takes for future chapters to be published ! YOUR WRITING IS DEFINITELY WORTH IT ! Good Luck in your current endeavors I know that whatever you set your mind to doing you will SUCCEED ! BYE for now ...

Just read the whole story and I loved it. Great characters, writing, and story. Look forward to the next chapter whenever it gets taken off Hiatus.

Can't wait for July when the readers get to know what happens next ! Thank you for sharing chapter 18 with us ... the saga continues ! Spiral your writing talents are greatly appreciated ...keep up the good work !

I love this story so much! It's really well written and the plot caught my attention from the first chapter, which rarely happens when i read fanfiction. Congrats and keep up the good work, love. See you next chapter