Shepard is still a needy bitch...

Wow, I thought this would be discontinued. Thankfully, I was proven wrong.

As far as I can tell, there seemed to be no apparent errors, but I could be wrong.

Keep up the good work.

Good job keep it up

Terrible story

are you sure it can't be a small harem, maybe narutoxshepardxliara, i like the liara shepard couple

good job

Awesome chapter

Well, my guess it's probably Orochimaru who's been tinkering. He'd be the prime target for indoctrination.

Well this was interesting

I’m still loving this story, I may have to go back and reread because it’s been so long. Keep up the great work

Sovereign isn't a Reaper ship class type, Sovereign is the name of one of the few sentient reapers that has free will, like Harbinger. They're basically the commanders/leaders or the reapers.

Yep, I'm done with this. Shepard is ruining it all, lmfao. She thinks she can actually reproach a man who is 100,000 years old? Sure, he's not perfect. But he's certainly a hell of a lot older than her, then what she said, she didn't even apologise? Fucking rude, spoilt lil shit.

She's 30, he's 100,000. BIG FUCKING DIFFERENCE. Not to mention, depending on how shit goes, he'll probably just end up watching her grow old and die. Also, what is all this sexist bullshit? A relationship is equal, at least a normal one, obviously. Naruto, who is basically the closest thing to a god any of these people know of and she treats him like utter shit half the time, then she scolds him for reacting to a bunch of dudes pulling out weapons? I'm sorry, I'd praise them for the reaction speed lmfao.

Then she's throwing tantrums and being possessive over a man who's got literal millenia's on her. She's a commander, not a fucking teenager. She's fought in wars and everything, a commander is supposed to as even as possible. Then SHE'S the one who wanted him to help save her galaxy, he could literally just wait for another group to arrive and help them instead, nothing is stopping him from doing so.

Honestly, stop this fucking pathetic submissive nonsense. No one hundred thousand year old would act like Naruto is half the time either and no one would fucking treat a person that old like they have been. More like they'd be honored he's even accompanying them. What the absolute fuck.

I managed to ignore so many poorly managed parts and then you go and pull this shitty teenage melo-drama out of nowhere. The fuck did you eat.

you create a god like being than make up a whole heap of stupid reasons to limit him, how boring.
your writing is really bad this is not worth reading

well you're spanish so that kinda explains the bad use of english, im guessing it was done with a translator.

a force powerfull enough to keep reapers out cannot be breached by a small ship like normandy. a pressure that pulls everyone to the floor would destroy every bone of joker due to his condition.
lastly you english is pretty bad