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bsmouse chapter 15 . 5/6 Thank you! I HATED SEASON 7! Not only because they killed Tara. But because it was such bullshit. Jax NEVER lost it. He never had that OMG she's gone moment. He wasn't at the funeral, he didn't pick out the headstone, he went and saw Collette, he banged Winsome and Wendy. ALL OF IT WAS BULLSHIT! And to be honest, a complete disrespect to Tara. And to their relationship. This was beautiful. A beautiful ending to a beautiful couple. Thank You. |
Jcasanovagaona7gmail.com chapter 15 . 7/30/2019 You are such an amazing writer! By the end of the series, I hated Jax so much. If Tara and Jax had to die, this is how it should have happened. |
Denise chapter 15 . 4/25/2018 Beautiful once again and you write so well - I cried through this whole thing. |
kaleik1 chapter 15 . 12/17/2017 This is way better than the shows ending...love a jax and tara love story...jax could never survive without tara... |
MiaToretto86 chapter 15 . 3/26/2017 So I'm sad you had jax kill himself but I understand. I'm glad I found this way after the show because I wish he found out like this |
Ohne Namen chapter 9 . 2/24/2016 Great story ,I read it now I am glad ,Tara could voice her thoughts to her it! |
Tessaturd chapter 15 . 10/1/2015 Omg, I read both of these stories in one sitting and basically cried the whole time. Thankyou for the excellent read. |
NaeNae78 chapter 15 . 12/5/2014 I am new to Fan Fiction and I only read Sons especially Jax and Tara! I love their story so much and it makes me so sad that they will never live a long life together after what Gemma did to Tara! but I just read your story and after watching all of Season 7 this the way it should have ended! I loved the way you had Tara to leave video's for Jax and the boys and a the letters about his dad, so he would know that truth, but with Gemma died now on the show he will never know! I love how Jax killer Unser cause he is the one who put all actions into motions the night Tara got killed, cause that is the real reason he needed to die for! I cried through this whole story! It was very beautifully written and I loved it! |
stacyo72 chapter 15 . 10/26/2014 Holy shit. I'm sobbing here. Beautiful but tragic. |
tignat chapter 15 . 10/17/2014 This story was great - i had tears in my eyes the last two chapters - not best idea while at work. Just wanted to let you know i enjoyed it and feel the same about Tara's death the show isn't the same without her. |
jcampbell943 chapter 15 . 10/8/2014 Omg I again could not stop crying. Every time it flashed to Tara's videos I bawled. I am still not over her death. Watching season 7 without her has been so difficult. Thank you for this amazing story. |
Dizzyliz83 chapter 15 . 8/21/2014 Just finished this and all I can say is wow. Loved Loved this. Cried most of the time of course. |
Beth Colwell Bel chapter 15 . 8/16/2014 Well, I loved it until the end. I didn't think I could read about S7 bc I was sooo sad about Tara. I was so happy Jax called the police on Gemma and I thought he would take the boys and leave. I was satisfied Gemma would be miserable in jail w/o her family. I understand Jax didn't think he could be a good father and missed Tara too much, but what about the boys? I guess they are young enough to live w/o their parents. Jax must have changed his mind about what he was going to do. I loved the Tara tattoo-that what I wanted, her face on his arm. The right arm made more sense to be w/his father. I am crying as had as I did at the end of the season. I can't stand that they are gone You did an amazing job. I read it all today and had a hard time breaking away. So many things you wrote were perfect. I am heartbroken. BTW, even though I consider myself a Christian, what if there isn't any heaven? What if Jax killed himself for nothing? I don't think Tara would have wanted him to do that. And Jax didn't need to earn a living, he would have had life insurance money, he could have left the club. Now Jax and Tara are just a story and yet they had so much love. I'm gonna hate S7 unless Tara somehow comes back. I thought I was ready for it to begin, but after reading your great story I realize I am not, bc this is probably how it will end. Gemma, Unser, Juice and Jax dead plus a bunch of innocents. I only watch for the J/T love story and now there is nothing left.I am crushed and heartbroken. I am glad that Abel thinks his mommy and now daddy are in heaven-that's all we can hope for. Truly good job! |
Lady Ramona chapter 15 . 8/12/2014 Well done, well thought out. Thank you for the wonderful ride. |
Cindy Burick chapter 15 . 7/29/2014 That was amazing and it did make sense..sadly. I think S7 preview at comic con was set to throw the fans into a spin. I think Unser at Tara's grave was a dream he had because it was so similar to Clays grave. At least I hope it is just temporary until Jax gets out of jail. I do think Jax will go very dark and evil and he will be redeemed by his positive feelings for the boys and Tara. In the end I think Gemma will be punished and Jax will be killed by a senseless drive by shooting. I would love to continue this discussion with you. You can reach me on Facebook under Cindy Rosen Burick. I love your writing...I am a big fan of your work. |