I loved this piece. I really did. I find Snake a very complicated character to write, but you did great. It was nice and bittersweet
And though not obvious the main point here, I loved how you described Joker, the contrast between the tear/sadness and his constant smile. "The sad but smiling man"

This is beautiful!

I enjoyed this. Simple and brief, but painted with a fleeting touch of profundity.

This is really cool, although I doubt that the other three realky know what's going on, they do seem rather oblivious to me; Tanaka yes, but the other ones, meh. And the song, well I love it. I think you put it in really well because although Snake actually doesn't know about it, it means something to him too. In short: You did a great job!

This is a nice little story. I like when a person interprets what a character thinks from the anime or manga.