I really enjoyed this one.. Seeing their relationship and how they just click from the viewpoint of so many others. U think what has me most impressed is your ability to truly convey each of these voices with such brevity of words.. Sherri in particular had me chuckling, and Marco with his Mariana gave me all kinds of feels. You're so talented. It truly is a pleasure to read your fics and ficlets..

We definitely need more of Marco calling Regina Bambina that's adorable

I love this. Not just because I love how you write each character, but also because you write about a character's reasons and goals for running - it normalizes in such a strange setting as Storybrook. That was awesome. :)

Loved the Parent-Teacher section.

That was very nice. You definitely should write a sequel! Loved it!

Amazing! absolutely loved this, brilliantly written, bravo!

Thank you for sharing. That was really nice.

This is such a creative way to tell the story! I would also love it if you decided to do a story that expands on the Paige storyline :)

Super creative way of writing Swan Queen! First time I see it from the eyes of the witnesses. :D

Wonderful! The first section was my favorite. Finding the badge under the bed was brilliant.

Loved it so much. Loved Marco and the school teacher the best. Nice, refreshing perspective. Thanks.

This brought a lovely start to my morning. So very endearing and terribly sweet. As much as I like the direct assault that my fellow Swan-Queen shippers in arms have launched, there is a lot more to be said about the shyer approach. Very affective and yet so subtle. I thank you, author, for this gift of warm and fuzziness. I now I am going to give in to urge to read it again...from the top.

I really loved reading this!

Great to read SwanQueen in a different way/from different perspectives.

Consider any more? ;-)

Thanks :-)

Bravo. Fucking amazing one-shot. I have no words. This is what great writing looks like, dude! Keep it up :D

Very charming and creative!