you only copy the original cannon without even trying to change the Sao events!

do you know that Sachi was Kirito first love?
and that Reiji killed her only because he did NOT want a relationship between Kirito/Asuna/Sachi?

why did you do the same? if Izayoi was "really" as op with his powers, couldn't he have saved Sachi and the moonlight Cats ? (I begin to believe that some authors choose to kill sachi only for convenience!)
Diavel?

Izayoi is right here to describe this story as "crossover" because he only acts as a spectator of Kirito's story.
it's NOT even "his" own story!

an Op Oc would have had the same effect as this copy-paste of the original story.

I wonder why you kept Kirito while Izayoi seems very good to replace him as main protagonist?

as a fan I feel slightly insulted by this disguised plagiarism

Your a fucking idiot read the subtitles on the anime its Grimlock and Egil is spelt Agil

level 50? how can it be level 50 at this point? the first boss has never been unlocked, the monsters of the first floor are lambdas and report little experience.

n50 and unable to save Diavel or prevent the beater event?
Kirito would not have done better ... oh wait he did it!

Izayoi just seems to be an extra character added only to pretend it's a crossover

I found this story average!
Why? because I feel that Izayoi is just an extra character and just replace Kirito with Asuna! the story is a copy/paste.
if Izayoi was strong why did not he prevent Diavel or Sachi death's?

the worst is that Izayoi seems to be only a... Kirito's clone, so his reactions are similar to his!

Izayoi getting out of bed because determined to find Asuna? Kazuto did the same thing in the novel! (Sao is a light novel)

I wanted to grit my teeth about his reaction towards Suguha, it's like you forgot or ignored Kazuto and Suguha as cousins / brothers / adoptive sisters?
why does he think of Suguha? Is it like you copied the novel and replaced Kazuto with Izayoi?

I never have the novel Mondaijitachi ga Isekai kara Kuru sou desu yo? but I expected Izayoi to be Kirito's clone or the hidden brother!

why did the boss come back to life? you said he went all the way to floor 35 (i think) so every boss between floors 1 and 35 should be dead because they don't respawn.

I'm strugling to understand for whose sake is this fic... the logical answer would be for fans of Izayoi and SAO buuuuuuut you have a fundamental flaw, your character doesn't really resemble the anti-hero vibe and general asshole that is Izayoi.

meh, that is not Izayoi, Iayoi would have saved her while making light fun of the rapers wannabes while givin Asuna some witty remark that would have triggered some tsundere response while he laughed his ass off

Overall this just doesn't make sense to me. I hope you can rewrite this chapter if you ever have the time.

Ok this chapter is completely confusing. They were going out in the real world and virtual so why did he say 'Can our relationship last?' and all that? It really makes no sense! What the hell? and, spoiler to the others by the way, Asuna mom approved of there relationship before so Sugou couldn't really marry her as Izayoi and Asuna parents approved of there relationship. Author, your story is no doubt great and all, but seriously I get that authors copy lines from said anime,manga or light novel but this just makes absolutely no sense. Izayoi is not fucking Kirito. He's an absolute badass who doesn't question his own relationship unless said girl is unloyal but he has good eyes so that can be thrown out of the window.

Really? i honestly felt nearly all interest i had in this story fade with the guys harass girl to be saved by protag scene

I know really well one character, who abandons his student.
He is General Gross Marian, from -Man...
Man... I really hate that guy... Luckily Izayoi isn't like that evil thing...

… Floor 35?!

HADES IS FROM BLACK CAT!
WHY IS A GUN IN SAO?
TRAIN HEARTNET AND IZAYOI PUT TOGETHER WILL DESTROY THE WORLD 100 TIMES OVER PEOPLE

I am reading it for the second time, I think it is interesting, also make a GGO arc one please.

it would have been better it you didn't completely follow canon with just one character added on