Lol. This was such a good chapter. Just love the banter between Ezio and Brooke.
It's been almost three years since this story was last updated. Hope to see a new chapter soon :-)

I just love how she is keeping Ezio on his toes. I really like stories were the player is dumbfounded by a girl who is resistant to their charms.

Hello!
This is a very interesting and a great change for the typical 'Renaissance' or 'American Revolution' way of telling the story. A nice change of pace for once. :) You did a good job piecing together almost all the AC characters and turning them into something modern. Unlike some fanfiction stories where description of clothes, places and people were really specific, your style gave these readers curiosity of what would, for instance, your OC would dress. I always imagined your OC dressing those really sexy clothes but not really that TOO sexy. Somehow kind of like wearing a mini shorts and perhaps a long sleeved blouse and some sneakers. Something like that. Your OC, Brooke, was very much maintaining her coolness and it really fascinated me that you had created an OC where she could actually, from time to time, owns a person like a persistent guy named *cough*cough* Ezio. :3 I find that very amusing and I can't help but smile and laugh in some parts involving Brooke and him.

Points to ponder on:
- Improve on describing a person's physical appearance. There are at some points that we, readers, also would want to know what the person/s look like.
- In connection with the latter, do not assume that everyone reading your story knows ALL the characters in AC. It still is good to clarify the characters at least through a simple physical description (Like Daniel Cross. I firmly believe I haven't encountered him in AC yet. It was a good thing I managed to divulge on Aveline from ACIII: Liberation, I think about many months ago or last year.)
- More improvements in spelling and grammar

Overall, great job for coming with this kind of story! I'm sure you'll continue this. :))) Good luck and I'll be looking forward for the next chapter! :33

Yeah what the fuck is going on? Did her brother did taking her to a party? Kinda like the Hillary duff film Have you seen that?

Awesome chapter 2. Was a bit skeptical on the first chapter but damn i love the conversations :3 anyways is this a EzioxOC fanfic? Just curious because ehehe i'm a Connor fan xD

I love how Brooke acts around Ezio! Finally some strong girls who is not very interested in his apperance! Good that I have found this story!
Update more pleeahess!

Finalleh! I thought that you have abbandon this ff! Good to know that you are back! I m waiting for next chapter as always!
Bye for now! :)

love it, but when'll be update?

UPDATEEEEEE!

When there will be next chapter?

Update! Please!

Ooh...a secret society? I wondered how the "rivalry" was going to play out. This sounds really interesting. Great chapter! And good luck with finals. :)

please please please update soon!

please update!

Yeah! Next one, please! :)