can't wait for next chapter.

This is so well written and just an overall pleasure to read! I would love to read more! Can’t wait to see what happens next

I think the characterization was a normal flow of hurt and slight grief, hearing big news and being left to just deal with it can definitely end in the result of anger but also melancholy. I liked the flow of this chapter!

Phew! White in a way is back! :)

Uh oh! This wont end well

That was considerably intense. I wish I had more to say but university just started back up and I'm kind of brain dead... I enjoyed the chapter, I look forward to more!

Nooo! I was hoping White would get Snivy! I'm very biased towards Snivy ok? Don't judge me! It's the only Grass starter I've ever chosen! I chose it in both Unova games lol and tried beating the Dragon Gym with it. I was back at the Pokemon centre after every battle!

I love getting to be in the brain of socially awkward people, it makes life so much more interesting. The fact that she is now communicating is great, and discovered in such a comical sort of way!

This is a surprise.

Daaw!

I've not had the chance to play this game all the way through so I'm looking forward to seeing what's going to go down. :)

The ending was funny when she left the day care man in that state XD

aaah the way you wrote,and the fact that the romance and flirting stuffs is not exaggerated makes me love this so much,hope this review helps you mentally on finishing this :D lul mentally,moral booster xD

That honey gym XD funny and yet ew :)
I hope she gets even with Cheren for that XD

Please write more. I have loved N ever since I played Black and I feel you have done a great justice to capturing his character.