I'm reading backward through the stories. You are number 12.

Wow. For a pretty short story, and a story where the author doesn't think much of herself. I was great! You should think more of yourself. I'm adding you to author favorites!

"no! My eyes are...um...are...theres something in them.

yes, there is! There is I say! I never cry! I never do! NEVER!"

ow...now there really is something in my eye! I jinxed my self.

aww, that was so depressing. you seriously almost made me cry and im not one for crying at fanfictions.

there all just kids! it's so unfair!

that was beutiful. trgic, yet it had a good ending. it almost brought tears to my eyes. you rock, dude. P

i have to say, you aLOMSt made me cry. my eyes were stinging, my tears were like, should we come out? nice story, so sad tho

Yes! Rachel and Tobias forever! Awesome.

um...it was a sweet story and all but it would have been better if like rachel and tobias had begged him to morph something so that he wouldnt die! Because he could have morphed to save himself.

You really need to reformat this. I like the fic, but it was hard to read. Also, it would technically be five hearts, cause Ax has 4.

I could barely keep myself from crying. It was a good story though, just very sad. *sniff*

It's so sad but it's really nice.

EEK! DON'T DO THAT! YOU MADE ME CRY! That was such a sad and good story. I loved it.

You are the best, keep writing.

Brillo-bads. I have tears in my eyes (and halfway down my face). Please write another one.

God that was sad. Very emotional and depressing-which is probably why I liked it...Now, if you'll excuse me, I'm off to have a good cry...

One of the best Fan Fics I've ever read, and one of my personal favorites. Exellent plot, great writeing style. I give it an 9