I want to read a fanfiction of Stan and his mate and how they overcome it.

For real though, she is WAY too obsessed with her Gran. To the point where it is kind of fucking weird how obsessive she is to her. I get that her grandmother is a big part of her life but she acts like she needs her to breath. Real people aren't like that.

Here is what I don't understand about Sookie's reasoning for not wanting to be a vampire that she doesn't want to watch stupid Jason and her gran die. Well her grandmother is old as hell and would most likely die in a few years anyway. So has she not even given that any thought before that her gran will ultimately die way before her vampire or not. It is really quite annoying that she doesn't even factor that huge detail in. Like she will just die if her precious Gran croaks before her. It will happen to matter what, DUH!

? WTH ?

Golly — I hope the mate of the king gets some clothes of her own sometime soon. Maybe Gran will pack a suitcase for her visit?

See this just makes no sense. She’s already had thoughts about him touching her & even putting his mouth all over her, but claims she has no idea what he expects from a mate. She’s from a rural area. If she can’t extrapolate the basic expectation from the word ‘mate’ she is so brainless she should never have been allowed to leave her Gran’s house without a minder to be sure she didn’t eat rocks or play in traffic!

So, when she finds out that Gran cheated on Grandaddy by fucking a fairy many times, does Sookie’s head explode into a small pile of goo?

She’ll become better after seeing her Gran? Seriously? Will Gran be bringing her a replacement brain?

Eric may be clueless, but I can’t blame him. This Sookie is a total nut job! She was desperate because she hadn’t seen her grandmother for less than 24 hours? She still acts as if she has no idea what is expected of a mate — seriously?

This piece is like a massive train wreck! Normally when the first few chapters of a story are bad I just stop reading & move on, but this one is SOOOOOOO TRULY AWFUL that I find myself acting like a rubber-necking gawker at an accident site. As much as I know I should just turn away, I can’t seem to resist seeing how much worse it might get. Wow.

She doesn’t want to outlive anybody? So, is she expecting her Gran to live forever or is she planning to die very young so she goes before her Gran?

Wow. Did this Sookie go through school via Special Education? She is seriously dim! The notion of having sex with him AS HIS CHOSEN MATE isn’t something she understands she’ll be expected to do? She eats like a pig at a trough (because surely her precious Gran must not feed her well?) then wipes the mess she makes of her face on her hands? She waffles from one extreme thought or opinion constantly and flips from belligerent to completely passive in the blink of an eye. This Sookie sounds like she might need to be housed in a special facility receiving regular visits from a psychiatrist with strong meds and constant supervision by a tutor/keeper!

If vampires have free rein in this world, how are there any fresh herds of young women left for these line-up?

This was a really great chapter I can't wait for the next one I hope you update soon this story is really good.

I hope you’ll continue this story!

she is so stupid

Can u finish the story I want to read more of ur story

Are you going to keep writing this story is so interesting I want to know how it ends