Cute :)

Funny:):)

Aww that was cute! Hand it to May to get lost in a forest. Luved it! :D

Content:
- I feel as though with this story, it may be best to give the reader a setting before throwing them into May's rhetorical questions. I also feel as though the sentence "Say, Ash and Brock?" is not needed.
-"Right, right." I feel as though the ending is a bit abrupt. It doesn't really have that "all comes together" feeling. It feels like there's supposed to be more.

Grammar and Formatting:
-"The path got darker and darker the more it stretched, and it intimidated her, but she had to be a big girl." I personally feel as though this may be an easier read if written as "The more the path stretched, the darker it became, and though it intimidated her, she had to be a big girl." This one's just me, so it's not necessary to change it.

Conclusion:
- I like you're writing style. It's formal, mostly easy to read, and can keep the reader reading.
-I feel like there should be more to this story. I saw that you were following a prompt, but I don't think I saw the prompt, so my opinion is based as a regular fic. There doesn't seem to be much here. I feel as though this is more of a scene of a story, rather than a story. It feels like it's supposed to continue.
- On the other hand, I think there is excellent characterization in this, and I love seeing this as one of May's conflicts in her journey. I could definitely see this actually happening to her.
-There weren't many grammar issues which is always good.

First thing's first, digging the new Alakazam avatar. :D

Secondly, this was really good! It was always fun to read your work. You have a way with May and Drew that's a unique perspective I think anyone could enjoy! Man, I wish we could have had the chance to finish "Avatar", but stuff happens. I'm just glad to see your back. :D

Well written and good characterization. I expect no different from you. :3

Drew is such a bucket of snark. "Next time, try not to come off as a stalker" is a great line; I busted up laughing after reading it.

This was cute! I'm so glad you took off with that prompt, because it's so very like May to get lost and (un)subtly follow Drew through a forest. Looking forward to seeing more from you!

Wow, this was great. You got May and Drew perfectly IC, and it's really hard to find a fic where all the characters, especially Drew, are IC. Lol, leave it to May to get herself lost in Ilex Forest and Drew to lead her out of it. And then stalking Drew and failing? She'll always be my favorite klutz. :P

But yeah, great to see another Pokémon story from you. I know exactly how you feel about quitting the fandom. A couple months ago I wanted to stop writing Pokémon and do stuff for other fandoms, but the Pokémon fandom still seems to have sucked me back in lol. I guess it's hard to stay away from Pokémon for so long. (That had nothing to do with this story lol.)

Anyway, great story! Happy holidays to you, too!

Seeing this here was a very pleasant surprise. :D
Perfectly in-character... PLEASE write more CS?