Reviews for Eternity
Nishimura3107 chapter 5 . 4/13/2017
Oh God this is so fuckin' amazing! Where did you go author? ! Please don't leave us like this!
Pyruvate chapter 5 . 3/8/2017
Oh darn it's well into 2017 now please don't leave us hanging like this
SableTable chapter 5 . 12/3/2016
This story is taking an ETERNITY! Lol. Seriously please update soon. I wonder if Alfred's death will result in war? What if the blood still didn't summon enough mirror pieces? What will King Francis do once he realizes what happened, his kingdom isn't technically involved...
soda-rebel chapter 5 . 10/31/2016
Is it next week yet? :D
Avery chapter 5 . 9/12/2016
Ehehehe... It's so sad that that was said almost two years ago...
LookinforBEANS chapter 1 . 8/24/2016
Alright so I know you probably won't since you haven't updated this story since 2014 bit can you please finish this story? I need to know what happens
JaegerEren08 chapter 5 . 7/10/2016
Please please please tell me this wasn't discontinued!
kayley chapter 5 . 5/21/2016
Oh, I do hope you update this sooner! This story is utter perfection! ️️ Heartbreaking stuff too. Was hard to read through the wedding scene what with Arthur's irritating indifference!
Emeraldinhereyes chapter 5 . 4/15/2016
Another amazing albeit unfinished piece. I must say I loved the imagery that you used for this one, particularly on the walk from the beach to the cave. Although I must exclaim, leaving a cliff hanger like that! Now who's on santa's naughty list? I find emotionless England to be quite intriguing if a bit hard to picture at times. Was there a reason you chose the kingdoms in such a way? I thought it was based on cardverse but you have Matthew as a king, Yao is a... Adviser aka the Jack for Ivan's winter (clubs), kiku is the Jack for summer (spades...?), and Arthur is the Prince for winter (again clubs). I can still see you making it linked to cardverse, Arthur finishing the mirror, Alfred somehow not dying, the two uniting and are given the run of the summer kingdom with Yao as their overseeer. Then I thought that was too typical or expected. I thought maybe you chose the kingdoms based on personality. The colder personalities (Ivan, Arthur, and Yao) are winter and warmer ones (Alfred, Matthew, and kiku) are summer. But then you'd have to put Ludwig with winter and honestly both Arthur and kiku have the ability to be kind of mean. All of them do really, have the ability to be dark or light. I wish you would update this but I'll admit it's been so long I don't have a lot of hope. I'd be very interested in seeing just where you go with this. I wish you well with whatever life currently has in store and hope that one day you come back to this. Until then köszönöm dearly beloved author.
anikidazo chapter 5 . 3/4/2016
this is amazing! please come back to it one day. thanks for all your hard work on it. xo
pinkdoughnuts chapter 5 . 1/30/2016
Ooh this is very Interesting. I like the idea of Russia, king of Winter. I like it when people don't keep writing him off as the bad guy.
Diurnal Days chapter 5 . 1/8/2016
My questions are not yet answered, and my burning urge to read more is unquelled.
I have high hopes that I can dig up more clues about what happened between this "prologue" and the rest of the fic once a new chapter (or two) is posted.
For now, though, I'm going to sample some of your oneshots. Either that, or I'm going to reread either Shatter or Align.
I'm not really surprised that you squeezed WWII canonverse into this fic. Anyone who reads your fics knows that you absolutely love writing about the 1940s.
I wonder what the next chapter will be like. OuO
Diurnal Days chapter 3 . 1/8/2016
I wrote a really long review for this chapter this morning.
Aaand then I forgot to send it. :T
To sum up my thoughts on this chapter, I feel like there's a lot going on here, and I have a hunch about some of the major questions the fic poses, but the plot is so mysterious that I really want to find out what happens next.
I love the mystical style that you write your fantasy stories with. I just love it. A lot. I want to read more of your fantasy writings.
Will my questions about what happened be answered in the most recent chapter? I'll find out, once I read it!
(Ivan's characterization in this fic is great. It's multilayered and complex and not clichéd.)
Diurnal Days chapter 4 . 1/8/2016
Brutal. Absolutely brutal.
God, I really want to find out what happens next.
Diurnal Days chapter 1 . 1/7/2016
I snuck in some time to read this between maths homework and clarinet practice, and, I have to say, I'm glad I did. XD
I don't have much to say so far, really. You're really good at writing fantasy; I'd love to read more of your fantasy writings (and I will). Did you reference Frozen with the line "I can't marry someone I've never met?" The first time I read that line, a smile plastered itself across my face.
Will Arthur warm up to Alfred eventually? Will Alfred let go of his memories of the Summer Kingdom and get used to his new life in the Winter Kingdom? Will RobinRocks update this story sometime in 2016?
Hopefully, I'll get the former two hanging questions answered when I read the rest of this fic later, and the latter will get its own answer over the course of the new year, lol
(BTW, your stories help me wind down after a long day. Idk, maybe I just like reading about Alfred squeezing some love out of his very own ice queen/prince (aka Arthur). Or maybe I'm just a really sadistic person who loves your darker fics such as Align and The Waning. I'll let you speculate over that. :P)
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