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   helena-3190 chapter 1 . 9/10 Woah this was gorgeeeeeeeeeeeeeeous. Painful but lovely. So, so well-written! |
| Alyse U chapter 1 . 2/1 So beautiful! |
| V chapter 1 . 2/7/2019 So light, so mesmerizing ... |
| Brokenangelsely chapter 1 . 9/11/2017 This was amazing to read. Such a rollercoaster of emotions. I was mostly scared and nervous to be honest. It was beautiful. |
| xxZutaraFanxx chapter 1 . 9/10/2017 This was beautifully sad. I thoroughly enjoyed reading and could feel the emotions of Zuko and Katara (but particularly Zuko) with each word. I also enjoyed the fact that the sections are out of order. In fact, it made me want to reread the story over again just to see how it would feel reading the sections in order. Its a fantastically unique idea that you have presented wonderfully! A great oneshot by a fantastic writer. Thank you for writing and sharing this with us. xxZuatarFanxx |
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/7/2017 I love it when Mai and Katara are friends I bet they would be just to make Zuko nervouse |
| cabasa chapter 1 . 12/4/2016 An absolutely beautiful piece of work. You are a great writer. Really skilled. Bravo |
| GuestStar chapter 1 . 9/17/2016 Beautiful, absolutely beautiful. Thank you for writing this lovely story. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/28/2016 Nice...have to finish it ..really good |
| Keepitup2319 chapter 1 . 6/27/2016 ...thought my heart was going to rip out my chest...thank you for not letting that happen 3 Lovely story |
| akai-sunset chapter 1 . 3/6/2016 this was beautiful. I really have no other words to say. thank you for writing this emotional piece. |
| Ms0Nicole0 chapter 1 . 1/1/2016 goddamn it I'm tearing up now... i love your writing! |
| Ana-DaughterofHades chapter 1 . 9/5/2015 I can't even; I think something broke inside of me. My God this was so good, and I can't even think straight to write a review. I am an emotional wreck. Thank you! |
| SoundScream chapter 1 . 6/22/2015 This is AWESOME! I love it, it is so real and really moved me |
| reallygoodliars chapter 1 . 3/2/2015 Is dead. DEAD. My only wish is that this story was longer so I could read it forever. But then again, I'm so amazed with how you create such a vivid story in so few words. I'm like super emotional right now and you pretty much did this to me. So good. And dead. |
