It's always sad to see authors notes with "not abandoned!" entries. It's practically the death knell of fanfiction.

This was a very intriguing story to read. I'm not sure if the smut really helped it any though, as I was mainly enjoying the various reactions and developing relationships.

Hot stuff, to say the least. A very imaginative addition to the genre. I hope there is more when I look for it, as it is such a fun bit of imagination.

Please continue!

It's surprisingly good and touching story would like to read more the only advice I can give is the flashbacks are to sudden and have little warning and support

Excellent work, and as always I am a big fan of how we get to see basically two stories in one. One of the past and another the present.

And so it begins. Glad to see the kiddos had a mean streak early.

Wonder which of them will suggest the multi solution.

I truly enjoy your skill at establishing things are different without having to give the whole chain of events for it.

Interesting. Seems events are a bit different.

So is this wonderful story abandoned/dead or is there something on the horizon?

I refrain from posting negative comments generally, but what's the big idea with equating Indian heritage with harems? They are Arabian constructs, not Indian. One man-one woman is the definition of marriage and in many families that do not wish to adhere to false ideas of progressivism, adultery is a shameful act. Harems are legalised adultery by definition which, by the law are grounds for the male to be arrested and incarcerated. Please refrain from making senseless statements under the garb of creative licenses.

still hoping you continue this

great story so far, loved that you included Narcissa and made her official already.

really enjoyed how he and Katie get along so far

great start