| Reviews for Maelstrom Effect Book 1: Crimson Hope |
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   stylo1 chapter 1 . 6/16 another naruto story that isnt naruto |
| HeavenSpire12 chapter 19 . 6/4 Oh shit, that was fast |
| Blaze501st chapter 3 . 6/1 so quick grammer tip. when you are talking about someone seeing something that is happeneing. it is Saw. not seen. for example. "Kaiden Saw Ashley take cover so he made a barrier". seen comes in in the case of someone asking a question "Officer, have you seen this man. he is wanted in relation to Saren". |
| Blaze1992 chapter 18 . 1/30 It's unique though kinda confusing. Plus it seems like the sequel will have a lot of drama and stuff since in this you made a big deal about how despite them being all street kids that their still family which means when naruto's "comes back" with Cerberus backing I think a lot of personal drama/crying/hateful words will be used a lot. |
| Blaze1992 chapter 1 . 1/23 do not like how naruto was blackmailed/railroaded by Hackett. |
| Leaf Ranger chapter 18 . 9/30/2019 And so that's the end of the first game. Have to say a bit disappointed that the team didn't call the Council out on their BS concerning Ilos, because so far, Shepard repeatedly had confirmed that obviously, they were right. But you do raise something of a point as well. Also, bit disappointed we didn't have any implied romance situations between leaving the citadel and Ilos. That kind of hit me in my hopeless romantic, and not in a good way. Still, overall the chapter was excellent, the fights interesting, so well done. |
| Jebest4781 chapter 18 . 9/28/2019 this was quite fun and can't wait to read the next book |
| Jostanos chapter 18 . 9/27/2019 ?Quien es? (Who is that?) Who is the mysterious cybernetic blue eyed person who may be a potential ally for Naruto, his clan/family, and the crew of the Normandy? Does Naruto have some explaining to do to his Normandy crew members? What may happen next? |
| KingRyu chapter 18 . 9/27/2019 Good ending kinda disappointed you didn’t add a naruto/tali scene |
| Gundam Meister Uzumaki chapter 18 . 9/27/2019 you should add liara to the Naruto x tali pairing. |
| Guardian of the Inheritance chapter 18 . 9/27/2019 Good job keep it up |
| Jostanos chapter 17 . 6/25/2019 Saren's a cyborg?! What's next? A geth that can think on its own? |
| Guardian of the Inheritance chapter 17 . 5/30/2019 Good job keep it up |
| Shadow chapter 17 . 5/15/2019 Loved it! |
| Leaf Ranger chapter 17 . 5/14/2019 well crap. you've gone and done something I was planning to do in my fanfic before me. Having Naruto fight Saren. x.x Overall, quite a good chapter. Very well done. glad to see everyone got out of there alive, though it sucked they couldn't rescue any of the Salarians held prisoner. And now we'll see the Council do what it does best: screwing things up. Keep up the excellent work! |
