Hey, I really like this story and the way you are going with it. As this wasn't updated for about half a year, I hope you still have plans to continue it. I guess im just going to check in every now and then and see if you continue writing. It would definitley be awesome!

That joke was fantastic! This story is really good and I'm really curious about how the story going to play out. Also, I like that you didn't just throw Jack and Hiccup into the roles of Peta and Katniss, but made Jack and Hiccup still be true to who they are.

im not trying ti be mean or anything but it seems as though you have a reslly creepy hobby of seeing hiccup get harrased. its getting kind of annoying.

Why don't you just publish the routes together (Like publish all of Nightfury First, then Frostbite, then Guardian defender)?

You're doing great, I had to stop for a second and make a squeek at different points though

My soul. It's missing. First you give us perfect gushy love that makes my smile go over my face and then you ripped my soul out, man. The story is great but still.

Don't get me wrong, I really enjoy this fic, but your enthusiasm is in my opinion hurting your fic. I understand why you want every possible senario in this since it's small chances that changes the tone but it's a lot of repeats.
Me personally, I would suggest making another spin-off if you want every way this to go down posted on this website or collect them chronologically at the end of this fic when the main story's done. There would be just as many repeats but at least people would know when it's a chapter that leads this story forwards and when it's an almost entire repeats

I'm sorry if it sounded harsh, that was not my intend, as I just want to see this fic be the best it can be. Especially since I've read 55 chapters by now

Poor Jack... poor, poor Jack. He’s suffering in District 13 without his freckly-faced Hiccup. Hurry and be the Frostbite as fast as you can Jack! The sooner the better, because that means you’ll be reunited with your boyfriend just as fast!

ooh I was loving those alterations until those divergent routes began... personal opinion, I'm not sure if mixed developments worked for me, they got too distracting and indecisive, sorry

AWWW YEAH UPDATES GALORE! I don't know which version I like better, there all have something to lose and something redeeming that lost and waaaah! KEEP GOING

there you go, Hiccup describing his home here. Nice. And wtf District 13... NIGHTFURY. YOU WANT HICCUP TO BE YOUR NIGHTFURY SYMBOL BUT YOU DON'T WANT THE ACTUAL NIGHTFURY WTABHF!

wow better. I like how you made them say each other's info. And yoooo Heather lives!

You could've made Toothless go with bim here... But I guess it would be unfair since Jack walked alone ...

Frosbite route was almost too much like the actual katniss version. Thank you for twists like how Heather/Madge died.

The people in District 13 are idiots in this version, lol! They don't want to rescue Toothless? He's a Nightfury! A NIGHTFURY! How can they possibly think having just Hiccup alone without his dragon will make him cooperate?!

UPDATE PLEASE! I need to see how all these routes will play out!