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   GreatNate1502 chapter 4 . 8/14/2019 Pls more |
| acetwolf94 chapter 4 . 6/8/2019 I LOVE IT! ADD MORE PLEASE! |
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/24/2018 Luffy is really out of character. Its not bad. But the story is all in thoughts and dialog. Not much description and it feels to fast paced. Plus a lot of cussing lol. Which isnt bad either. But a cuss word every sentence is a little to much. Just some advice. |
| Justuraveragefan chapter 4 . 3/23/2018 This story is so interesting. I've bern following it since arigato was published. Please update soon im dying to know what happens next. |
| Anime100 chapter 4 . 11/25/2017 This is truly interesting and heartwarming to read; please update very soon it's hilarious to read where even a small injury on Luffy's person could send both Sabo and Ace into a frenzy |
| arinasution5 chapter 4 . 7/20/2017 Grsat |
| Platinum-bro chapter 1 . 5/14/2017 stupid story actually. if you are saying that luffy is smart and couldn't use his smartness because his opponent didn't let him use means he is opposite of smart for not using his mind luffy risking every single person's life he cared for to hide his smartness? and why he would not act smartly and like king with his friend? don't luffy trust how did ace doesn't know that? he is with him when luffy was a making luffy intelligent and haki wielder makes all the action he did before is plain he knows about the hell was his problem against using armament and observation hak? it shouldn't harm anyone other than a the desired bullshit excuse you made him say it doesn't children may be. |
| Guest chapter 4 . 4/21/2017 Best fic ever! |
| LunaSoraYamiMoonlightCrystal chapter 4 . 3/31/2017 Please please update! |
| Lerya-chan chapter 4 . 3/2/2017 This is amazing! I really love the brothers relationship :D Thank you for this. Hope you update soon! |
| creativesm75 chapter 4 . 11/20/2016 cool |
| Sayo.00 chapter 1 . 9/22/2016 You use too much 'fuck' for Luffy, you even use words that if he had to memorise 1500 times for a day or he would get Garp's Love Fist 500 times, he still wouldn't. You know, Haki means Mind Rope, it means he can control his power if he at least tried; if he doesn't have the will he can't release his power, this is plain stupid. He only released his power back in Marineford because he had a huge determined will to protect his brother, yet now he doesn't seem so insisting on using his powers to protect his brother, it seems more like a 'bother' then a 'brother', the whole plot and the way you executed it is bad. |
| yuzukikuran476 chapter 1 . 7/22/2016 Hmm am sorry for pointing this out but there are some spelling mistakes in the Summary and in this chapter but am not sure about other chapters but I still looking forward to reading more of this amazing story and thank you for making this story and Thank you for keeping ace and white beard alive in this Story and am glad that luffy is strong and I hope that luffy and ace and white beard And his crew would get stronger than anyone. |
| Guest chapter 4 . 5/23/2016 When are you gonna update the story is soooooooooooooo gooooooood I would hate it if you stopped now. |
| Guest chapter 4 . 3/18/2016 Continue Continue Continue Continue Continue Continue Continue Continue Continue Continue Continue Continue Continue Continue Continue Continue Continue Continue PLEASEEEEEE! This is absolutely great! I love how ruffy is smart and ohhhh it's just so suuuuuper! |
