Reviews for About Jack |
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![]() ![]() The “our da Vinci” chapter is my fav! I just love ur fanfics! |
![]() ![]() He sounds so precious in this one!~ |
![]() ![]() please continue this! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Do the guardian realize that he's naked? |
![]() ![]() Love the story, it's awesome! Love your writing style to. One word of advice though, you could spend a little bit more time describing the surrounding area, little more vivid imagery description maybe? Otherwise, this is perfect! |
![]() ![]() Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww *dies* |
![]() ![]() Dang it! This is cute! |
![]() ![]() This is a really good idea for a AU! I really hope ya can continue this, cuz I've only even seen one little chapter - this one - about this idea! Amazin |
![]() ![]() Plz make a second "Chirstmas Party" chappie! Tha'd be amazin! |
![]() ![]() Pleeease continue this. I love it so very much! Original idea. |
![]() ![]() More Guardian Airlines! That'd be amazing. |
![]() ![]() Lol. Ta ta! |
![]() ![]() "A grin that looked the slightest bit pained" poor Frostie... I DO! I WANT MORE! I ALSO DONT CARE THAT MORE THAT THREE EXCLAMATION POINTS MEANS YOUR INSANE! |
![]() ![]() I pictured Jack in the front of a rickety old beaten car - or maybe a tank? - yelling "this is awesome!", Sandy sticking his head out a hole the the top with a machine gun - golden sand one of course - Bunny, North, and Tooth all in the back screaming with Baby Tooth clinging on to Jack's hoodie hood with her front arms also yelling "this is awesome!" Lol. |
![]() ![]() Oooooh, can't wait for the next part of this mini story |