Reviews for A Series of Firsts |
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![]() ![]() Wow I enjoyed this. Thanks! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was wonderful. |
![]() ![]() It annoys me that one-shots don't get as many reviews or as much attention as long stories. There's this beauty that can only be captured in a one-shot; it allows the author to prioritize scenes and details over plot. I loved the way you formatted this, and how it was unique in the "first time" moments. I loved this, overall. The way you demonstrated the growing need each girl felt for the other, your descriptive language, everything. Good job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love this it's amazing |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cute! I really like it. It's saddening that Johanna almost died, because she was worried about Katniss, but I'm glad Katniss made it back to coax her back to life. |
![]() ![]() this was great |
![]() ![]() ![]() It was perfect. |
![]() ![]() Eep! Cute but kinda confusing but adorbs. Totes. But sweet I loved it I just. Sigh. Really good. |
![]() ![]() I'm a fan of the new segments. :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is so good. One of my favorite Joniss one shots out of all the ones I've read |
![]() ![]() ![]() As a strict 'stick-to-the-story' Joniss, this is totally adoarble. :3 I love it, and Johanna makes me squee in that last segment. |
![]() ![]() Me gusto mucho ! Katniss y Johanna hacen una linda pareja. Me gustan los One - Shots que escribes :D Feliz Navidad! y escribe mas historias. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I LOVED this! You did amazing in capturing both of their personalities and it's just too sweet for words! Thank you for writing this! I hope you will write more for this pairing! |