Reviews for Blackout
Guest chapter 48 . 11/23/2019
This story is amazing! It took forever to read, but it was worth it.
The combination of canon events with original plot points was just right, topped off with a bittersweet, but entirely fitting ending.
The characterization was very well done throughout - even people like Shippou, who can be easy to forget about in fight scenes, were never left out. I particularly appreciated how believable everyone's reactions to Kagome's pregnancy were, especially her mother's. As a result, I think the story felt more down to earth, like something I could see happening in real life.
Overall, wonderful story, definitely worth the read! Thank you!
Guest chapter 48 . 5/21/2019
Fue genial, eres un sensei, felicidades
roxxy87 chapter 48 . 7/25/2018
Omg this story was exhausting and painful. Not painful as outs bad writing or anything but just so full of angst. I mean I'm pretty sure you had the ENTIRE anime series of angst in this single story. With the exception of the last two or three chapter's not a single sweet or romantic thing happens for more than a few paragraphs at a time (except between sango and miroku) . I'm not saying any of this is a bad thing, you just might want to warn a person.
hallowdark94 chapter 19 . 3/21/2018
"He's afraid of me. I'm going to remind him why."
YES!
5redroses chapter 47 . 9/1/2017
Those vows were sweet and also hilarious when he tried to avoid swearing. Trust Inuyasha not to plan ahead!

I have to say that that image of him with Tetsusaiga is a very alluring one indeed!
5redroses chapter 46 . 9/1/2017
'"Yeah, but—oh, your feet still hurt bad, don't they?" he asked, his ears lowering.' Wouldn't he have been wearing a hat on their date?
I loved the massage scene, and was really proud of Inuyasha for thinking of it... until I learnt the truth, lol
5redroses chapter 45 . 9/1/2017
Technically Inuyasha, you never actually said 'I love you', but that's just me being picky :p
I hadn't expected Kagome to reject him, but I'm kind of glad she stood up for herself for once and did. Kind of like how Hermione slaps Ron when he comes back after leaving her and Harry in the seventh book.
5redroses chapter 41 . 8/31/2017
Hmm, I'm not sure telling her friends was the best idea, as I don't think they'll find a baby with dog ears as easy to accept as he being pregnant. For that matter, won't she have to have the baby in the feudal era if she wants to bring it up there? I thought she wouldn't be able to travel through the well once it was born.
5redroses chapter 40 . 8/31/2017
Yup, I hate him. Probably not as much as Joffrey or Ramsey Bolton from Game of Thrones, but then none of his crimes of sexual.
5redroses chapter 39 . 8/31/2017
Now you say it, I do see a lot of similarities between Sid and Hakago. If only it were so easy to bring Hakago down...
5redroses chapter 38 . 8/31/2017
One of the things that really sucks about Hakago being in control is that he is tearing apart Inuyasha's reputation as a gentle hanyou. I just hope that the fact that he is going by the name of Hakago means that there will be less of a problem when Inuyasha gets his mind back. He's going to be sickened by the things his body has done though...

Only six?! I was almost convinced when he said 100, haha.

'So yes, Miroku was still a letcher, and would likely always be. As long as he was her lecher, Sango didn't really mind.' I love this bit, and feel like it really sums up their relationship.
5redroses chapter 36 . 8/31/2017
Aha, I was waiting for them to find something weird at the ultrasound. Kagome has got off lightly though it seems, as the dog ears weren't too clear. Maybe they're currently folded over? I feel sorry for her having to pretend to be so irresponsible though, although that being said, fighting demons while pregnant can't really be called responsible behaviour...

I've noticed that a couple of times you've written 'She had said her peace'. It should actually be 'piece'.

Hmm, I wonder if giving her a hickey was deliberate or accidental. Knowing Miroku, I would assume the former...

I love how they end up giggling after she whacks him. Poor Miroku must be suffering a severe case of blue balls though!

'Sango knew that she did not need to communication (communicate) this desire to him.'

I'm sorry to hear about your great-aunt. 104 though, that's impressive!
5redroses chapter 35 . 8/31/2017
Oh Kagome, Kagome, Kagome, you're not supposed to take hot baths when pregnant! She probably shouldn't be using hot springs either, come to think of it. How pregnant is she in this chapter anyway? I know she's somewhere in her third trimester, but there's a big difference between three and six months (literally!).
5redroses chapter 34 . 8/31/2017
Ah man, out of the frying pan and into the fire?
I wonder how Hakago managed to twist that memory though. What was Kagome asking Inuyasha not to do? Hmmm
5redroses chapter 28 . 8/31/2017
You made the rapport between Inuyasha and Kagura feel very natural- good job!
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