love the fluffiness of this chapter! just what i needed

So much fun! I love your writing style, it's so easy to picture the scene exactly. I'm excited for the next chapter. And I'm very much looking forward to the "eventually." ;)

Super fun! I love your writing style! It's so easy to picture the scene exactly! I am excited for the continuation of the story. :) I am looking forward to the "eventually." ;)

wow let me just say even though it took me two nights to read this it is an epic story! the character development and the detail you put into the phycology of it all is amazing I am in LOVE with this... im aware you take your sweet time inbetween updates *i read all the notes ... BUT i can not wait and WILL wait for the next chapter of this amazing fic.
Brynn has to be my fave OC woman i have ever read honestly, i love her.. her charm and banter is honestly the best part for me. Well done 3

Lmao. Stark being Stark with the name calling. Severus... Lord Sauron... Lmao. I’m WEAK...

Yep. Knew Ivers was evil. What exactly is she up too though is the MILLION dollar question

Yeah. I don’t trust the doctor either.

Well... shit... didn’t see that coming. What a PLOT TWIST

Really enjoying the story so far. Was the ice-making Inhuman inspired by the student from the academy? I just finished watching all of AOS and I'm so happy to see the team show up in the story. I'm a Loki-fanatic and love when he's written so beautifully.

Well THAT was an intense cliffhanger... I wanna read more.

I hope Loki is strong enough to not yield to the scepter... I really do

Hello! Yeah, as you can see, it really took me a while to come back to your story, and I think that the blunt, harsh truth is that it's moving slowly... I'm only stating my opinion here, and I don't make any overall judgement about how your fic should be, but when I came back to the last chapters (27 to 30), it was truly difficult for me to keep on reading, because I didn't exactly know who was doing what, who was going where, and there were almost three chapters basically focused on preparing their plan for Ives, and then there's this Inhuman thing...

It's becoming really confusing, and I guess it's probably me not keeping up well, but I don't feel like there's any tension coming out of the narration because I'm too focused on trying to recap what's going on. If I were to sum it up, I would say the course of action itself is slow, but involves too many details. And it's really frustrating for me to say that, because I absolutely love the beginning of this fic and your writing style in general. I don't mean to say that it's becoming bad, and I'll probably keep on reading, but now I just feel like I can't exactly picture what is going on...

So at least I wanted to leave this review even though it's not a positive one, to share my own perception, but know that I'll still be around to look at what's to come!

Hey, recently found this story! I love it!

Although, as I’m reading, I notice it seems we are jumping from chapter 20 to chapter 22? Is this normal?

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Welcome back! Good to see you again! My favorite thing about this chapter is the wannabe X-Man. I've never been obsessed by the X-Men-Thor & Loki fan since 1966-but I can just see Loki's expression while he makes chutney out of a teenage punk! I'm looking forward to the next post...

Absolutely love the story!